Be Wee With Bea Part2
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "A Terrible Squishing"Continuation of Bea's Strollings
16 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
My first read of you story. I always enjoyed animal stories as a kid.
I enjoyed how she was afraid Sweet Puppy would be easily distracted and then she was completely distracted by the honey.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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My first read of you story. I always enjoyed animal stories as a kid.
I enjoyed how she was afraid Sweet Puppy would be easily distracted and then she was completely distracted by the honey.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed my characters. Bea is actually about me and Sweet Puppy is my dog who passed this January. Scruffles passed about 15 years ago. Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I just posted the next chapter Sweet Puppy to the Rescue. Check it out.
Feel free to check out the origin of this story in the first book Bea Wee with Bea .
Comment from Tessla-Jane1
Excellent story with an enjoyable cast! I loved the detail in the descriptions and the way you convey the characters emotion. I can't wait to see more in this series. Fantastic work.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Excellent story with an enjoyable cast! I loved the detail in the descriptions and the way you convey the characters emotion. I can't wait to see more in this series. Fantastic work.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed my characters. Bea is actually about me and Sweet Puppy is my dog who passed this January. Scruffles passed about 15 years ago. Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I just posted the next chapter. Sweet Puppy to the Rescue. Check it out.
Feel free to check out the origin of this story in the first book Bea Wee with Bea .
Comment from beizanten
An attention capturing title. A good and interesting opening paragraph. it has an intersting and engaging plotline with interesting characters to back it up
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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An attention capturing title. A good and interesting opening paragraph. it has an intersting and engaging plotline with interesting characters to back it up
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed my characters. Bea is actually about me and Sweet Puppy is my dog who passed this January. Scruffles passed about 15 years ago. Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I just posted the next chapter. Sweet Puppy to the Rescue. Check it out.
Feel free to check out the origin of this story in the first book Bea Wee with Bea .
Comment from JLR
A solid steady well written composition that allows the reader to flow easily with the chosen words. A sound tension throughout the read, thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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A solid steady well written composition that allows the reader to flow easily with the chosen words. A sound tension throughout the read, thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I just posted the next chapter. Sweet Puppy to the Rescue. Check it out.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a wonderful chapter and I was so nervous to think that Bea wouldn't be able to get out of the dumpster. Your writing is clear and interesting, well described and charming. Loved it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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This is a wonderful chapter and I was so nervous to think that Bea wouldn't be able to get out of the dumpster. Your writing is clear and interesting, well described and charming. Loved it. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Marilyn...Thank you for your interactive review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
You tell the story of people needing food and eating it from a dumpster. A kind of sad story at Christmas time. The image was an interesting choice for this story. I liked your explanation at the end. It added insight into your story. Well penned. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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You tell the story of people needing food and eating it from a dumpster. A kind of sad story at Christmas time. The image was an interesting choice for this story. I liked your explanation at the end. It added insight into your story. Well penned. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your supportive review. I'm gad you got the message. My chapters are multi-layered
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice chapter even if there is not so much action the mental exercise it's a nice bridge to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and waiting for Bea to pick up the pathð???ð???
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Nice chapter even if there is not so much action the mental exercise it's a nice bridge to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and waiting for Bea to pick up the pathð???ð???
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your supportive review.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Poor Bee. They must all be very hungry. And while tomatoes and bananas are food, they're not exactly p rime food for cats and dogs. And no one, if they're not ripe. I bet in the true story behind your story, they had many disappointing nights.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Poor Bee. They must all be very hungry. And while tomatoes and bananas are food, they're not exactly p rime food for cats and dogs. And no one, if they're not ripe. I bet in the true story behind your story, they had many disappointing nights.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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I'm grateful for your compassionate review. Yes, before I rescued them I know Scruffles did not have a good home and Sweet Puppy was found walking along a street very malnourished. She had no hair on her hind quarters. I said, "little girl you've got to get some hair on those legs".
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You are welcome. You're the one with compassion, I would say!
Comment from LeannaP
Doing her investigation exercise she saw that it was what we call a banana. She'd never seen anything like it.
I absolutely adored this line. I thought it was a very interesting read. You captivate the reader in a very reclusive way. Good for you.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Doing her investigation exercise she saw that it was what we call a banana. She'd never seen anything like it.
I absolutely adored this line. I thought it was a very interesting read. You captivate the reader in a very reclusive way. Good for you.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Your welcome
Comment from Mabaker
This is a very good chapter Liz. It shows what can happen when Bea plunges into things without proper brain excising. However, she a young bear, and by the time she has matured, she will make less of the mistake, and plan each move. Of course, having a cat for a companion must be frustrating. Keep 'em coming to Liz I'll keep reading. Sincerely Anne
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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This is a very good chapter Liz. It shows what can happen when Bea plunges into things without proper brain excising. However, she a young bear, and by the time she has matured, she will make less of the mistake, and plan each move. Of course, having a cat for a companion must be frustrating. Keep 'em coming to Liz I'll keep reading. Sincerely Anne
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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I'm glad you got to see this one. It took a lot of editing. Thank you for your review.
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Hi to you. The editing is the hardest part, I have difficulty in keeping sentences short. I waffle. Anne
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If you read Steinbeck. I'm sending you a link. Just read the 1st paragraph. Let me know what you think.
https://archive.org/stream/in.ernet.dli.2015.207559/2015.207559.Cannery-Row_djvu.txt
