Make Lemonade
When events sour your days make lemonade37 total reviews
Comment from humpwhistle
Very nice job with the structure of your naani. And I admire your
'play' on words with 'serve it back.' Nice volley.
But the whole 'make lemonade out of lemons' saw is pretty
well worn at this point.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Very nice job with the structure of your naani. And I admire your
'play' on words with 'serve it back.' Nice volley.
But the whole 'make lemonade out of lemons' saw is pretty
well worn at this point.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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It is sadly true we over state the often impossible!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You chose the perfect topic for your uplifting, well-written naani. When I taught school, I displayed a poster with the caption "When life gives you lemons, make lemonade."
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You chose the perfect topic for your uplifting, well-written naani. When I taught school, I displayed a poster with the caption "When life gives you lemons, make lemonade."
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
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Janice, time worn advice, that I regret many people miss and act as victims.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's a good idea. Who doesn't like lemonade? Lemons have lots of uses, so why complain about them? The world may not get its lemons back tho. Hurl one at me, and it's mine. LOL Good luck in the contest.
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That's a good idea. Who doesn't like lemonade? Lemons have lots of uses, so why complain about them? The world may not get its lemons back tho. Hurl one at me, and it's mine. LOL Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
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LOL I love your spunk!
Comment from QC Poet
A great message placed into a creative Naani format poem. Best of Luck in the contest. The syllable count compliant word choice and photo included with your posting are excellent.
Blessings!
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A great message placed into a creative Naani format poem. Best of Luck in the contest. The syllable count compliant word choice and photo included with your posting are excellent.
Blessings!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani with good advice to not let any one bowl you out and caught you off guard. Make the best of every bad situation and hit them back with a curve ball.
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A very well-written Naani with good advice to not let any one bowl you out and caught you off guard. Make the best of every bad situation and hit them back with a curve ball.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
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Sandra, Yes don't just give up to the stuff of LIFE...mix it up, stir things around and get after it!
Comment from royowen
You've done a great job of this Naani, a little less strict than its cousins, I thought it was done in four lines, but I'm not sure. (It's been a long time since I wrote one) but beautifully done, you did it in 20, and the subject and wording is excellent, good luck, blessings Roy
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You've done a great job of this Naani, a little less strict than its cousins, I thought it was done in four lines, but I'm not sure. (It's been a long time since I wrote one) but beautifully done, you did it in 20, and the subject and wording is excellent, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
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Roy it is --when I did the edit it changed the last line, I went back and reset this, I am so grateful thanks!
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Well done
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Amazing poem I like how you twisted the whole concept of the lemonade into a nice parabole :"catch them, squeeze them dry,
make lemonade, serve it back!"
Good luck with the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Amazing poem I like how you twisted the whole concept of the lemonade into a nice parabole :"catch them, squeeze them dry,
make lemonade, serve it back!"
Good luck with the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you Iza!
