Make Lemonade
When events sour your days make lemonade37 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Naani writing prompt.
So very true. The message here is a good one.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
  |
I think this is a good entry for the Naani writing prompt.
So very true. The message here is a good one.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
-
Thank you!
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a great little poem. We have all heard the saying about making lemonade when life hands you lemons. This poem goes to the next step. Serve it back. It's like kindly beating people at their own game. Good word usage, like the word hurls In the first line. Good work!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
|
This is a great little poem. We have all heard the saying about making lemonade when life hands you lemons. This poem goes to the next step. Serve it back. It's like kindly beating people at their own game. Good word usage, like the word hurls In the first line. Good work!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
-
Thank you!
Comment from rjuselius
hahaha. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! i do like the philosophical sentiment hidden in a subtle tone.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
|
hahaha. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! i do like the philosophical sentiment hidden in a subtle tone.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
-
Thank you!
Comment from Daniel Dalke
Good contest entry. A good way of summing up and illustrating the "making lemonade" concept. It seems the last line could have used a couple more syllables and stayed within the constraints, but good job.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
|
Good contest entry. A good way of summing up and illustrating the "making lemonade" concept. It seems the last line could have used a couple more syllables and stayed within the constraints, but good job.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
-
Thank you!
Comment from Dancemom
Very good naani with the correct lines and syllables. The part of about serving it back is very clever. You chose a great photo too. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
|
Very good naani with the correct lines and syllables. The part of about serving it back is very clever. You chose a great photo too. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
-
Thank you!
Comment from Ogden
Now, there's food for thought! Or a drink for thought? This easily could be about either revenge or being a good hostess (guys don't make lemonade vert often).
Are you the ldy or the tiger? ;)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
|
Now, there's food for thought! Or a drink for thought? This easily could be about either revenge or being a good hostess (guys don't make lemonade vert often).
Are you the ldy or the tiger? ;)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
-
Thank you!
-
Probably the lady. You're very welcome, either way. ;)
:Don
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Very clever at meeting the requirements of the prompt contest. I enjoyed your poem. I like the image for this piece. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
|
Very clever at meeting the requirements of the prompt contest. I enjoyed your poem. I like the image for this piece. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
-
Brenda, thank so much!
Comment from dkblack
It's too cold here today for lemonade! I liked how quickly you turned those lemons into lemonade and served it right back! Good for you! Nice contest entry!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
|
It's too cold here today for lemonade! I liked how quickly you turned those lemons into lemonade and served it right back! Good for you! Nice contest entry!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
-
Thanks much! Bundle upp1
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Sage advice. It is actually an art that few people are able to handle. As time goes on and we begin to manipulate the wrong to make it right, it becomes easier. A great presentation with the age-old words and a beautiful picture, your message comes through, loud and clear.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
|
Sage advice. It is actually an art that few people are able to handle. As time goes on and we begin to manipulate the wrong to make it right, it becomes easier. A great presentation with the age-old words and a beautiful picture, your message comes through, loud and clear.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
-
Raffaelina, thank you! It is true we have lost our moral compass.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Sage advice. It is actually an art that few people are able to handle. As time goes on and we begin to manipulate the wrong to make it right, it becomes easier. A great presentation with the age-old words and a beautiful picture, your message comes through, loud and clear.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
|
Sage advice. It is actually an art that few people are able to handle. As time goes on and we begin to manipulate the wrong to make it right, it becomes easier. A great presentation with the age-old words and a beautiful picture, your message comes through, loud and clear.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
-
Raffaelina, thank you! It is true we have lost our moral compass.
