Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with your rhyming acrostic poem about making snow angels. My favorite line is the first one. Your picture/graphic is perfect to illustrate it. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019

Thank you for taking time to review my poem and the stars.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written acrostic poem about the snowflakes falling in winter like little lace droplets forming thick blankets children like to play in making snow angels and a snowman.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019

Thanks Sandra! Your feedback is something I look forward too.

Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt

Excellent

Well done acrostic poem reminiscent of childhood winter memories. Your poem fits the demographic of your audience. The illustration fits the poem.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks your for your thoughtful review, I appreciate it and the stars

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I like the feel of it. It flows well and the imagery is very evocative of a snowy day. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks Oliver. Your review and thoughtful comments are appreciated.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poem Spelling Snowflake writing prompt.
Your verse is a great description of children making snow angels.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks Sharon, I appreciate you stopping by and your thoughtful comments.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

That's cute. I think we all made snow angels when we were kids. It was fun. That was a tough acoustic, and you managed it perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks, Cindy!

Comment from Barbaraj1

Excellent

This is a cute poem and the artwork fits it perfectly.
I love your first line Silly little lace drop. Children do love to make angels
in the snow.
Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks for reviewing and thoughtful comments.