Dreams of Santa Claus
Children, holiday cheer, goodwill to men30 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
This is such a nice upbeat reminder that Christmas is coming and we can enjoy all the traditional trimmings and special times together during this season.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
This is such a nice upbeat reminder that Christmas is coming and we can enjoy all the traditional trimmings and special times together during this season.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Susan, thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun and uplifting post and you made me all excited for Christmas as I love Santa Claus and all the trimmings, a fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
This is a fun and uplifting post and you made me all excited for Christmas as I love Santa Claus and all the trimmings, a fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Smiling back..thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is a definite reminder that Christmas is around the corner, JLR. I enjoyed reading it. Your words read well in this format. I like how they are 'sandwiched' between the same word (Christmas) at the beginning and end. I know it is part of the style, but this seems special. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
Your poem is a definite reminder that Christmas is around the corner, JLR. I enjoyed reading it. Your words read well in this format. I like how they are 'sandwiched' between the same word (Christmas) at the beginning and end. I know it is part of the style, but this seems special. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Jan, thank you very much, Jim
Comment from Daniel Dalke
Good contest entry, good job of following the contest constraints. Nice expression of the season. The format doesn't require rhyming, but I enjoyed the two lines you did rhyme, which made me wish you had been able to rhyme more. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
Good contest entry, good job of following the contest constraints. Nice expression of the season. The format doesn't require rhyming, but I enjoyed the two lines you did rhyme, which made me wish you had been able to rhyme more. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Counting down the days is not reserved only for children, I dare say -- I love the season still! Your poem is one excellent example of of how I enjoy it here, too, on FS! Nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
Counting down the days is not reserved only for children, I dare say -- I love the season still! Your poem is one excellent example of of how I enjoy it here, too, on FS! Nicely done.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sanku
A good rictameter .Since it is the Christmas season ,you have aptly chosen to write about it .The form suits the theme very well. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
A good rictameter .Since it is the Christmas season ,you have aptly chosen to write about it .The form suits the theme very well. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a delightful Christmastide rictameter poem. You use the tropes of the seasonal festivities to conjure up some great imagery: sliver bells, mistletoe, tree's aglow {thumbs up}.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
This is a delightful Christmastide rictameter poem. You use the tropes of the seasonal festivities to conjure up some great imagery: sliver bells, mistletoe, tree's aglow {thumbs up}.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a cute poem about Christmas. You have followed the rictameter format properly. Very well written. Good luck in the contest. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
This is a cute poem about Christmas. You have followed the rictameter format properly. Very well written. Good luck in the contest. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from angel123
I like your descriptive Christmas poem and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with your meaning of Christmas and I like your artwork choice. It goes well with your thoughts. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
I like your descriptive Christmas poem and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with your meaning of Christmas and I like your artwork choice. It goes well with your thoughts. Best wishes!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written rictameter paints a lovely, heartwarming Christmas scene centered around the excitement of being a child waiting for what Santa will bring.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
Your well-written rictameter paints a lovely, heartwarming Christmas scene centered around the excitement of being a child waiting for what Santa will bring.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thank you!