Winter Dawn
Haibun2 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice work up and presentation for this one it is so nice to see this. Don't ya just love it to watch mother wake up the world lighting up the day.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Nice work up and presentation for this one it is so nice to see this. Don't ya just love it to watch mother wake up the world lighting up the day.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Yes indeed soon it well be Solstice Day - ever more light ! Thanks for sharing zanya
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Amazing what we miss when we're not paying attention!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
crisp,cold December --> crisp, cold December
in our now almost, permanent --> in our almost permanent
local park.
The winter --> local park. [eliminate the line return here] The winter
clear, pebbles at the bottom clearly visible. --> [use of 'clear' to close together....?]
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Amazing what we miss when we're not paying attention!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
crisp,cold December --> crisp, cold December
in our now almost, permanent --> in our almost permanent
local park.
The winter --> local park. [eliminate the line return here] The winter
clear, pebbles at the bottom clearly visible. --> [use of 'clear' to close together....?]
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Thanks for reading and those guidelines -much appreciated zanya
