Canine Coppers
Brief History Of Police Canines13 total reviews
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is an interesting script. I'm assuming all the detail is factually correct {thumbs up}.
I didn't pick up on any spags. There was just one point I was dubious about, though:
Rookie #1: Why did this end? -- This question presupposes the use of canines to guard naval installations and the docks at St. Malo did actually cease. What precedes gives no indication of that fact, why would Rookie #1 know that fact? Maybe I'd reword this part to:
"Rookie #1: Do dogs still guard St. Malo today?"
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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This is an interesting script. I'm assuming all the detail is factually correct {thumbs up}.
I didn't pick up on any spags. There was just one point I was dubious about, though:
Rookie #1: Why did this end? -- This question presupposes the use of canines to guard naval installations and the docks at St. Malo did actually cease. What precedes gives no indication of that fact, why would Rookie #1 know that fact? Maybe I'd reword this part to:
"Rookie #1: Do dogs still guard St. Malo today?"
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thanks for your review. DR. MARTI does tell him between Rookie #1 and Rookie #2.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting walk through history of the canine force used as a tool of dispersing riots through the world. Thank you for bring up this beautiful subject. German shepherds are the best for this job. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Interesting walk through history of the canine force used as a tool of dispersing riots through the world. Thank you for bring up this beautiful subject. German shepherds are the best for this job. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this script. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Great script, Brett, and awesomely educational to boot! ;) See, if 'history' texts could be presented in such unique ways, the kids might actually retain more of it!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;)
P.S. All but one of our shepherds growing up were the offspring of two of the city's police dogs!! ;) :)
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Great script, Brett, and awesomely educational to boot! ;) See, if 'history' texts could be presented in such unique ways, the kids might actually retain more of it!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;)
P.S. All but one of our shepherds growing up were the offspring of two of the city's police dogs!! ;) :)
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
