Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Another superb punny boyfriend, Lisa. I really like these fifty worders because there is no messing around getting the story out, clearly and with great wit.

Most entertaining and can't wait for the next.

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a wonderful and fun post. I love the punning statements therein. May your weekend be blessed. Merry Christmas.
Patricia

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2019

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written fifty word flash about the choice we make that sometimes backfire on us, but it seems the baker is a good choice there will at least always something sweet to eat.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

You are something! I really enjoyed this. So amusing. Gave me a giggle. Your play on words is outstanding. You deserve a sixer for this one, but I don't have one. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

Comment from lauralumummu

Excellent

I am laughing this is great and hilarious. What a relationship at least she won't go hungry. Great entry for the contest. All the best, Laura.-----------------

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

LOL This guy sounds like a keeper! And there will always be bread on the table, although, man does not live on bread alone! Maybe she could get a sugar daddy who runs a meat market!
Luv,
Patty

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks for your review, Patty. A butcher will be making an appearance one of these days.

Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

Very clever Lisa. I enjoyed reading and laughing at all of your bread puns especially the one about the " Bun in the oven" and opportunity laying in "the yeast" and not the west. Very funny story well done .

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks for your supportive review, Justin.

reply by Justin Chopin on 04-Dec-2019

You're welcome Lisa.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifty-word story, Life with a Baker, does leaven-y thing to the imagination. The baker gave her flours, had a roll, and is now doing what the butcher and candlestick maker refused to do.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is well penned and nice to see a real provider since they seemed to be rolling in dough. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

Ha, ha! I counted seven puns in only 50 words. That's packing them in {thumbs up}.

I guess Lucy was taken by his dough-eyed smile. I think she should have used her loaf.

Thanks for the chuckles {smiles}.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019