Oceans of Rain Drops
The rain cycles from ocean to stream over and over29 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A trout never sees
the ocean
until the rain comes.
An excellent lune in count and content for the contest. I do believe it would be a shock to the trout who is used to a narrower place.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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A trout never sees
the ocean
until the rain comes.
An excellent lune in count and content for the contest. I do believe it would be a shock to the trout who is used to a narrower place.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Wow! Science 101 LOL Yep it is a cycle. The water evaporates up into the clouds. Water from every river, lakes, reservoirs, oceans and even the water on the pavement. When they are mixed in the clouds, clouds get too heavy and [t rains over all different kinds of water. Did I pass?
Merry Christmas!
Patty
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Wow! Science 101 LOL Yep it is a cycle. The water evaporates up into the clouds. Water from every river, lakes, reservoirs, oceans and even the water on the pavement. When they are mixed in the clouds, clouds get too heavy and [t rains over all different kinds of water. Did I pass?
Merry Christmas!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
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A+. Now you are ready for Physics 101. LOL
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have effectively used the few syllables allowed for the lune to describe
a fact of nature. The poem and notes informed me of something I had never heard!
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You have effectively used the few syllables allowed for the lune to describe
a fact of nature. The poem and notes informed me of something I had never heard!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
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Janice, thank you! I am an avid fly fisherman and very connected to Mother Earths with this hobby.
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear jlr! i love the imagery and the content. very well written and bravo my friend.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
rebekka xxx
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this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear jlr! i love the imagery and the content. very well written and bravo my friend.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
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Rebekka, thank you as always. As an avid fly fisherman I am connected to the rhythms of Mother Earth
Comment from June Sargent
Very clever way of depicting these trout swimming in an ocean. The imagery is clear and the words flow nicely. I enjoyed this short, but imagnative piece. Always a pleasure to see what you will come up with next.
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Very clever way of depicting these trout swimming in an ocean. The imagery is clear and the words flow nicely. I enjoyed this short, but imagnative piece. Always a pleasure to see what you will come up with next.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
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June, I do thank you. Always a pleasure to read and reflective on your work also. May your holiday season be filled with abundant Joy's!
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this philosophical Lune poem, J... well done. The rain cycle is never ending and does bring the ocean to the stream. I liked that thought! Good write.
Melissa
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I enjoyed reading this philosophical Lune poem, J... well done. The rain cycle is never ending and does bring the ocean to the stream. I liked that thought! Good write.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
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Melissa, I am an avid fly fisherman and I connect the oceans the the streams in every outing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune about the trout never sees the ocean but the ocean fills up the stream where he swims and lives when it rains. A good thought out title to say oceans of raindrops
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A very well-written Lune about the trout never sees the ocean but the ocean fills up the stream where he swims and lives when it rains. A good thought out title to say oceans of raindrops
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
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Sandra thank you so much. I connect to this so naturally as I am an avid fly fisherman and I am always aware of the connection.
Comment from Therese Caron
I never knew that about trout! And how nice to learn about it in a poem. This is perfect for a Lune contest entry. The words are crisp and concise, and the image is lovely. Nice work
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I never knew that about trout! And how nice to learn about it in a poem. This is perfect for a Lune contest entry. The words are crisp and concise, and the image is lovely. Nice work
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
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Therese, thank you...I am an avid fly fisherman and every time I get out I an so aware of the cycle of mother nature.
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I live on Lake Champlain in the Adirondack mountains. It is gorgeous here and fishing is BIG, including ice fishing.
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Interesting piece for the contest. You are right about the oceans and the streams, good point. You did a good job at writing for this challenging contest. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
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Interesting piece for the contest. You are right about the oceans and the streams, good point. You did a good job at writing for this challenging contest. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
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Brenda thank you,
Comment from amada
This Lune Poem, 5/3/5, has a lesson and a philosophical truth as well. I allows the reader to think beyond what to fix for dinner tonight, but about the ins and outs in the vast ocean. At the same time your poem here allowed me to learn about the particulars of a trout.
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This Lune Poem, 5/3/5, has a lesson and a philosophical truth as well. I allows the reader to think beyond what to fix for dinner tonight, but about the ins and outs in the vast ocean. At the same time your poem here allowed me to learn about the particulars of a trout.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you, the connection was made easy as I am an avid fly fisherman and Mother nature is at her most vivid presence when in the water.
