Stepping Stones
Don't get tripped up by problems (2-5-2)12 total reviews
Comment from Helena Frances
This is great! I love the picture -- it fits perfectly with the verse.
I am optimistic by nature and definitely believe in looking for the lesson to be learned in challenging situations. You said it succinctly:)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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This is great! I love the picture -- it fits perfectly with the verse.
I am optimistic by nature and definitely believe in looking for the lesson to be learned in challenging situations. You said it succinctly:)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for this terrific view. (Sounds like you are an optimist like me... we enjoy our lemonade from lemons.)
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:)
Comment from angel123
I like your poem very much. It's cleverly written with insight and inspiration. It flows well with wisdom and your artwork choice is wonderful. Best wishes!
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I like your poem very much. It's cleverly written with insight and inspiration. It flows well with wisdom and your artwork choice is wonderful. Best wishes!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-5-2 writing prompt.
Your short verse has a clear and good message.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-5-2 writing prompt.
Your short verse has a clear and good message.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this creative entry for the contest. That is definitely a skill to work out and continue to get better at because life will throw some rough tests. Thanks for sharing this encouraging writing.
Bill
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Great job with this creative entry for the contest. That is definitely a skill to work out and continue to get better at because life will throw some rough tests. Thanks for sharing this encouraging writing.
Bill
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wise and positive write and rather than every cloud has a silver lining you used those stumbling blocks as stepping stones, I loved your inventiveness here! Love Dolly x
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This is a wise and positive write and rather than every cloud has a silver lining you used those stumbling blocks as stepping stones, I loved your inventiveness here! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is good and I like the message conveyed in it. That's exactly what we should do with stumbling blocks. Use them for the opposite purpose that they were intended for. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and beautifully written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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This is good and I like the message conveyed in it. That's exactly what we should do with stumbling blocks. Use them for the opposite purpose that they were intended for. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and beautifully written work. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks very much for reviewing, Jeffrey.
Comment from Rmocruz
You have presented a wise and positive message in this clever two-five-two post. The visual art selection is well complimenting.
Best wishes with this worthy writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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You have presented a wise and positive message in this clever two-five-two post. The visual art selection is well complimenting.
Best wishes with this worthy writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks for your review and positive comments!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a good entry for the 2-5-2 contest. You accomplish something with your 9 syllables. They are very motivational. I can actually see them on a poster in a high school classroom. And, of course, that artwork is the perfect complement. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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This is a good entry for the 2-5-2 contest. You accomplish something with your 9 syllables. They are very motivational. I can actually see them on a poster in a high school classroom. And, of course, that artwork is the perfect complement. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks for your review and positive comments!
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! I like how you've reassigned a different purpose to "stumbling blocks". The image you've selected complements the message as well {thumbs up}.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Ha, ha! I like how you've reassigned a different purpose to "stumbling blocks". The image you've selected complements the message as well {thumbs up}.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks for your review and positive comments!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about the stumbling blockss of life that often try to throw us off balance but when we make use of it to climb higher we overcome the things that want to get us down.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about the stumbling blockss of life that often try to throw us off balance but when we make use of it to climb higher we overcome the things that want to get us down.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks for your review and positive comments!
