Ink of Ages
From eons of imagination and legend...35 total reviews
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent example of a lune poem, meeting the meter requirements. I love poems about the art of writing, and the phrases you chose are engaging.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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This is an excellent example of a lune poem, meeting the meter requirements. I love poems about the art of writing, and the phrases you chose are engaging.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Thanx so much Susan -- always so good to hear from you, ma'am!! ;)
Please forgive my 'running behind' ... as mid-terms close in, my tutoring schedule has ballooned and my 'free time' has all but vanished! Exams are next week so there is a light at the end of the tunnel - LOL! :) A very Merry Christmas to you from my little corner of the world!! ;) Yvette
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO Y.M.ROGER: I like your poem in that it is brief, clear, and to the point. With just nine words and three lines you express how you pass your poem from your imagery, through your pen, onto your paper, and then to your reader. Well done, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing. You are appreciated. God bless you, Y.M.ROGER. Cordially; rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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HELLO Y.M.ROGER: I like your poem in that it is brief, clear, and to the point. With just nine words and three lines you express how you pass your poem from your imagery, through your pen, onto your paper, and then to your reader. Well done, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing. You are appreciated. God bless you, Y.M.ROGER. Cordially; rhonnie69.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Rhonnie - so good hear from you!! ;) A very Merry Christmas Time from my corner of the world to yours!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Yvette, a very well written, good Lune poem. Good use of metaphor in line two. Lovely overall display and a strong contender for the contest I think. Good Luck - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Hello Yvette, a very well written, good Lune poem. Good use of metaphor in line two. Lovely overall display and a strong contender for the contest I think. Good Luck - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Dorothy - please know that they and you are always so appreciated! :)
Please forgive my 'running behind' again and 'short response'... as mid-terms close in, my tutoring schedule has ballooned and my 'free time' has all but vanished! Exams are next week so there is a light at the end of the tunnel - LOL! :) A very Merry Christmas to you from my little corner of the world!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ronni
Oh indeed dear Yvette,
Quite prophetic and visionary your poignant Lune Poetry
contest entry here. Rightly or wrongly writers and poets
often rely on or envision something akin to mystical
in their writings, and do end up in penned form, one
way or another. Were that not just a mysteriously
so, there would be lot less writers and writings to often
warrant those mystical visions.
I do hope your pen always stays fully inked to the fullest,
and your extraordinary visions keep you challenged and
energized and excited to keep sharing them. As you have
already!!! And love it you keep living up to those visions
and irresistable tenacities to keep expressing them dear!!!
Thanks for sharing, best of luck in contest!!!
Blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Oh indeed dear Yvette,
Quite prophetic and visionary your poignant Lune Poetry
contest entry here. Rightly or wrongly writers and poets
often rely on or envision something akin to mystical
in their writings, and do end up in penned form, one
way or another. Were that not just a mysteriously
so, there would be lot less writers and writings to often
warrant those mystical visions.
I do hope your pen always stays fully inked to the fullest,
and your extraordinary visions keep you challenged and
energized and excited to keep sharing them. As you have
already!!! And love it you keep living up to those visions
and irresistable tenacities to keep expressing them dear!!!
Thanks for sharing, best of luck in contest!!!
Blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Oh, Ronni -- you do say the the most encouraging things... THANK YOU! :) And I'm glad you enjoyed this 'lune-acy' LOL!! :) It was fun, but I really am ready for this semester to be done so 'short ones' are about all I've got in the 'gas tank' right now - lol! One more week...I can do this!! ;) :) Christmas Blessings to you across the miles, my lady - take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely entry for the Lune Poetry contest.
Nicely stated in so few words. I love your poetic pen.
Well done and good luck toy ou with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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I think this is a lovely entry for the Lune Poetry contest.
Nicely stated in so few words. I love your poetic pen.
Well done and good luck toy ou with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Wow, Sharon -- it's looking like a few days ago you were a busy lady: THANK YOU for allowing me to be on the winning/receiving end of such a flurry! :) Your comments and review are wonderful and welcome -- thank you!! :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
I could visualize your "mystical visions" and hope your "poet pen" stays loaded with ink! Yes, that had to be you in the picture--best wishes in concluding the semester and in the Lune Contest- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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I could visualize your "mystical visions" and hope your "poet pen" stays loaded with ink! Yes, that had to be you in the picture--best wishes in concluding the semester and in the Lune Contest- Joan
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Joan - please know that they and you are always so appreciated! :) Merry Christmas Time!! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this lune 5/3/5 poetry contest friend Yvette, you have posed a literary dilemma for me, I knew you were a clever writer, but I think you're right, sometimes (frequently) I wonder who just wrote my last post, sometimes I have to think...but my head hurts when I do. Good luck my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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This is an excellent entry in this lune 5/3/5 poetry contest friend Yvette, you have posed a literary dilemma for me, I knew you were a clever writer, but I think you're right, sometimes (frequently) I wonder who just wrote my last post, sometimes I have to think...but my head hurts when I do. Good luck my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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LOL!! ;) You always have that quick wit about you, Roy - thanx for that and thanx for the review, sir!! ;)
Please forgive my 'running behind' again and 'short response'... as mid-terms close in, my tutoring schedule has ballooned and my 'free time' has all but vanished! Exams are next week so there is a light at the end of the tunnel - LOL! :) A very Merry Christmas to you from my little corner of the world!! ;) Yvette
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Don?t apologise my friend, you NEVER have to.
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
I love the colourful image and presentation. You summed up what a poet does in a clever way. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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I love the colourful image and presentation. You summed up what a poet does in a clever way. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Brenda - please know that they and you are always so appreciated! :) A very Merry Christmas to you from my little corner of the world!! ;) Yvette
Comment from patcelaw
This is a solid lune poem for the contest and I wish you the best in the contest. May your month be blessed with wonderful peace and joy.
Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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This is a solid lune poem for the contest and I wish you the best in the contest. May your month be blessed with wonderful peace and joy.
Patricia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Patricia - always so appreciated! :)
Comment from AvL
Ms. Roger's pen-umbral poetry shines most brilliantly against a dark background. Her pellucid plume serves as her link/conduit to a world of light and inspiration -- Plato's Ideal Realm of Archetypes, perhaps? -- that feeds her visionary verse. It is her word-wand. Kudos.
AvL
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Ms. Roger's pen-umbral poetry shines most brilliantly against a dark background. Her pellucid plume serves as her link/conduit to a world of light and inspiration -- Plato's Ideal Realm of Archetypes, perhaps? -- that feeds her visionary verse. It is her word-wand. Kudos.
AvL
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Hey there, AvL -- so good to hear from you! ;) Thanx for the wonderful review - always so appreciated! :)
Please forgive my 'running behind' again... as mid-terms close in, my tutoring schedule has ballooned and my 'free time' has all but vanished! Exams are next week so there is a light at the end of the tunnel - LOL! :) A very Merry Christmas to you from my little corner of the world!! ;) Yvette
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To Yvette:
As a former teacher of English, I have been there. Joyeux Noel!
AvL
