Ink of Ages
From eons of imagination and legend...35 total reviews
Comment from Barbaraj1
This another great poem. You come up with such interesting subjects
and then create lovely poems. I love the artwork you selected.
Nice alliteration. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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This another great poem. You come up with such interesting subjects
and then create lovely poems. I love the artwork you selected.
Nice alliteration. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hey there, Barbara J -- thanx for your great review on this one! ;) The shorties are a bit of a challenge sometimes, so we try to have fun with them, yeah? :) :) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Liz O'Neill
What magnificent imagery this poem stirs in the reader. Even though you don't specifically allude to any particular I sense a powerful allusion. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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What magnificent imagery this poem stirs in the reader. Even though you don't specifically allude to any particular I sense a powerful allusion. Well thought out.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hey there, Liz -- thanx so much for stopping by today... so good to here from you in this neck of the woods! ;) :) Take care out there, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. You did a nice job of creating a lune poem with a story and meaning. I know I'm not artistic I'm just a hillbilly writer. I leave artistic writing up to people who know how to do it. Well done. Z ;)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello Yvette. You did a nice job of creating a lune poem with a story and meaning. I know I'm not artistic I'm just a hillbilly writer. I leave artistic writing up to people who know how to do it. Well done. Z ;)
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Well, hillbilly or not (pretty sure not!), I know I am a fan!! lol! Thanx for your great review on this one, Z! ;) The shorties are a bit of a challenge sometimes, so I gotta have some fun with them, yeah? :) :) Take care, sir! ;) Yvette
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I can prove I am a hillbilly. I have references. :))). Z
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest Yvette. I liked the picture you used and perhaps there is some similarities lol. The words are so true for not only you but anyone who writes, I have seen your mystical creations and the pen does do magic.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Good luck in the contest Yvette. I liked the picture you used and perhaps there is some similarities lol. The words are so true for not only you but anyone who writes, I have seen your mystical creations and the pen does do magic.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Good morning, Alie, and what a lovely review -- you made me blush (although I will deny this tear if asked after this moment)! ;) Thank you, THANK YOU, my lady, and I find myself looking for your name in the 'message listing' for some 'quickies' (you know just some flashes or the like) on the different decorations there in the RV Park -- please surprise us with a string of 'RV Artistry at Christmas' (or something like that -lol!).... Take care over there in the Great Southwest! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, I will get creative before the end of the year, lol.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the artwork
and presentation, Yvette.
-The feather is great, and
I didn't notice the "fella"
until I read your author notes!
-I can surely empathize with you:)
-A very well written line with
effective use of one continuous thought.
-Good alliteration and imagery, too.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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-I like the artwork
and presentation, Yvette.
-The feather is great, and
I didn't notice the "fella"
until I read your author notes!
-I can surely empathize with you:)
-A very well written line with
effective use of one continuous thought.
-Good alliteration and imagery, too.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Good Morning, Lady Pam! Thanx for your great review on this one - so glad you enjoyed! ;) The shorties are a bit of a challenge sometimes, so we try to have some fun with them, yeah? :) :) LOL! Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. It is always good to have some fun:) You take care, too.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice short 'i' assonance in 'mystical' and 'vision.' Great 'w' alliteration in weave and way, and great 'p' alliteration in 'poet pen.' I think this lune touches on the sense of magical mysticism poets often feel when they begin to write something that feels as if it is literally inside a writing utensil and begging to be let out, and of course 'poet pen' can be a metaphor for the urge to write, too.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Nice short 'i' assonance in 'mystical' and 'vision.' Great 'w' alliteration in weave and way, and great 'p' alliteration in 'poet pen.' I think this lune touches on the sense of magical mysticism poets often feel when they begin to write something that feels as if it is literally inside a writing utensil and begging to be let out, and of course 'poet pen' can be a metaphor for the urge to write, too.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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You always take such care with your reviews, Crystie -- thanx for that and thanx for your great review on this one! ;) The shorties are a bit of a challenge sometimes, so we try to have fun with them, yeah? :) :) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
Your mystical visions certainly do, oh 'Queen of Golden Pen.' Christmas break nears for you and a break!! You can have some real time to sit and write. Wait, real time? I don't know how you do it dear lady. It's been quite a year for me with many challenges but Ive been able to get in some good writing and hone my skills. Thanks for being such an inspiration.
My best forever, and for the contest,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Your mystical visions certainly do, oh 'Queen of Golden Pen.' Christmas break nears for you and a break!! You can have some real time to sit and write. Wait, real time? I don't know how you do it dear lady. It's been quite a year for me with many challenges but Ive been able to get in some good writing and hone my skills. Thanks for being such an inspiration.
My best forever, and for the contest,
Sal xo
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Oh, you do know me waaaaay too well for this relationship to be but a cyber one, Lady Sal -- however, I am looking forward to gettng those grades posted by the 16th and just 'doing home stuff'!! ;) :) And your writing is just wonderful ... an easy style that's not too relaxing but not too formal -- love it!! ;) :) And you are an inspiration, my lady, don't EVER forget that... you hear me?!! :) :) Take care of all of y'all over there in the Sunshine State! ;) Yvette
Comment from damommy
And good visions they are, too. Enjoyable to read and well written. What a lovely way to state it.
Hang in there, girl. The Christmas holidays are coming soon to give you a break. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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And good visions they are, too. Enjoyable to read and well written. What a lovely way to state it.
Hang in there, girl. The Christmas holidays are coming soon to give you a break. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I'm hanging, I'm hanging -- just two more weeks.... actually this week and next is just exams!! ;) :) Thanx for your review on this one, Yvonne! ;) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, you've done it again, and not only do I wonder where you find the time -- you are so prolific -- but how you come up with your many, wonderful ideas. This is beautiful, Yvette! A tiny jewel.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Well, you've done it again, and not only do I wonder where you find the time -- you are so prolific -- but how you come up with your many, wonderful ideas. This is beautiful, Yvette! A tiny jewel.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Good morning, Lady Dawn -- thanx for your great review on this one! ;) The shorties are a bit of a challenge sometimes, so I gotta try to have fun with them, yeah? :) :) Thanx for your encouragement and take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
A very, very nice Lune poem entry with a terrific illustration to accompany the same.
You composed an elegant poem with vivid word imagery. Almost every word provides us a glimpse of your thinking as mystical poet (-;
Mark
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Yvette,
A very, very nice Lune poem entry with a terrific illustration to accompany the same.
You composed an elegant poem with vivid word imagery. Almost every word provides us a glimpse of your thinking as mystical poet (-;
Mark
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Wow, Mark, what an awesome review, sir -- such an honor! Although I know you've mastered them, it seems these shorties are a bit of a challenge sometimes, so I try to have fun with them, yeah? :) :) Thank you, THANK YOU for your accolades and my you have a wonderful remainder of the week out there! ;) Yvette
