Contradiction
Winter is both harrowing and breathtaking.32 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Greetings from Florida. However, I lived near Niagara Falls, New York for seven year with my family and know this cold and beauty very well. I especially loved Goat Island near the Falls where the rising mist would freeze the trees and coat everything white. A fine winter white offering for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
Greetings from Florida. However, I lived near Niagara Falls, New York for seven year with my family and know this cold and beauty very well. I especially loved Goat Island near the Falls where the rising mist would freeze the trees and coat everything white. A fine winter white offering for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh yes, winter has two sides to her personality, she is beautiful and she also has a chilling heart. We need to embrace her because we have no choice, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
Oh yes, winter has two sides to her personality, she is beautiful and she also has a chilling heart. We need to embrace her because we have no choice, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you you so much!
Comment from Dancemom
I really like this. The title is perfect, because winter is a contradiction between beauty and danger. Very well written. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
I really like this. The title is perfect, because winter is a contradiction between beauty and danger. Very well written. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Patty Palmer
It won't be very long until it's going to be looking just like this picture! And nothing wakes you up quicker in the morning like scraping snow and ice off of your car windows.
It's beautiful as long as I don't have to drive in it!
Nice poem and beautiful picture!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
It won't be very long until it's going to be looking just like this picture! And nothing wakes you up quicker in the morning like scraping snow and ice off of your car windows.
It's beautiful as long as I don't have to drive in it!
Nice poem and beautiful picture!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your nice review!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-5-2 writing prompt.
Your short verse describes winter very well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
I think this is a good entry for the 2-5-2 writing prompt.
Your short verse describes winter very well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from BeasPeas
It is a paradox, isn't it? This is a very nicely composed short piece. Good wording and you've made a true statement. We may hate the inconvenience of snow, but winter surely is beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
It is a paradox, isn't it? This is a very nicely composed short piece. Good wording and you've made a true statement. We may hate the inconvenience of snow, but winter surely is beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Ogden
This is an all-around beauty, replete with imagery! Fine idea, execution, and illustration!
(Not bad at all, in only nine syllables.)
:o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
This is an all-around beauty, replete with imagery! Fine idea, execution, and illustration!
(Not bad at all, in only nine syllables.)
:o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thanks - I do find these little poems a challenge! Thanks for the 6 stars!
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You're very welcome, Therese.
Keep up the good work!
Don
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! Spoken/Written like a true Northeasterner who knows and appreciates winter. We border Canada on the other coast so we have much milder winters. Hope you stay safe and the power stays on!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
Wow! Spoken/Written like a true Northeasterner who knows and appreciates winter. We border Canada on the other coast so we have much milder winters. Hope you stay safe and the power stays on!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thanks for the nice review!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Sometimes, now, I wonder which is more beautiful, Summer, Autumn, Winter or Spring? Winter is so awesome as your picture here depicts. It has a surreal beauty that does not compare with anything else. A lovely presentation.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
Sometimes, now, I wonder which is more beautiful, Summer, Autumn, Winter or Spring? Winter is so awesome as your picture here depicts. It has a surreal beauty that does not compare with anything else. A lovely presentation.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is a very nice poem. I live in the Chicago area so I know about ice
and snow. But the trees are pretty. Good luck in the contest with this
2-5-2 poem.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
This is a very nice poem. I live in the Chicago area so I know about ice
and snow. But the trees are pretty. Good luck in the contest with this
2-5-2 poem.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much!!