Lurking in the Shadows
A Rondeau for the Potlatch Challenge13 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is delightful, June. I've probably told you, but I manage a community of feral cats. I've done it for 15 years or so. My sweet ferals spend theirs lives lurking around. I love the repeat-"she lurks around." Those are great words to build a poem around.
You brought your sweet cat to life. I enjoyed the read very much.
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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This is delightful, June. I've probably told you, but I manage a community of feral cats. I've done it for 15 years or so. My sweet ferals spend theirs lives lurking around. I love the repeat-"she lurks around." Those are great words to build a poem around.
You brought your sweet cat to life. I enjoyed the read very much.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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It is a wonderful thing you are doing, managing a feral community of cats. So, you know all about their lurking habits. Lol Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed this little romp.
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It was a rollicking romp. Thank you.
Comment from JLR
You truly wrote a wonderful rondeau for the Potlatch club entry. The meter, the refrain yep the image are of purest content. A pleasure to read! Congratulations on a wonderful piece.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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You truly wrote a wonderful rondeau for the Potlatch club entry. The meter, the refrain yep the image are of purest content. A pleasure to read! Congratulations on a wonderful piece.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Always nice to get your input. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from jenintorre
'She lurks around.' what a great description of a day in the life of a cat.I really like the imagery you portray in this well rhymed poem. Nice one. Cheers Jen.
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'She lurks around.' what a great description of a day in the life of a cat.I really like the imagery you portray in this well rhymed poem. Nice one. Cheers Jen.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed his little romp in the neighborhood!
