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So confusing

Is she or isn't she

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Comment from Joan E.
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WOW--what an eye-catching picture and colorful presentation! I agree with your title and assertion in the 3-5-3 that even includes rhyme. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
    Many thanks Joan
Comment from angel123
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Your poem written in fun displays the humor in you. Your artwork choice compliments your thoughts. Your poem flows well and best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
    Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A funny poem, and you made me smile here. I think you can tell this guy is a guy, but often you can't tell the difference these days! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thanks Dolly
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Don't you know that it doesn't matter any more.... those pronouns are no longer applicable and could get you in trouble at work in some states... sigh. :) That exasperation aside, this is a hilarious offering for the contest! ; ) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thanks Yvette
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Write a 3-5-3 Poetry contest.
Your short verse matches the crazy picture very well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Many thanks
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-5-3, So Confusing, has the right set up and finds that the world of sexual identity is quickly confused with dressing up for a gag. Boys will be boys, or whatever else, I guess.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thanks Bill
Comment from Alex Rosel
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This is a poem addressing contemporary issues. I'm sure many readers will relate to it. Although, of course, it's dependent on the photo accompanying it, but that doesn't detract from it.

"Tell, he's from she's but ..." -- The apostrophes confused me here. If this was mine, I'd reword it to:
"Tell he from she but ..."

Good luck in the voting booth {smiles}.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thanks a lot Alex. I will take your advice and change it