Yes, I'll Share!
A Zimmerman Trido for Pies (with a cheat line at the end) ;)33 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
I loved it. It made me very hungry. Well told and beautiful poem about pies. The image and presentation with different colours of font worked great with this piece. A challenging rhyme scheme that you met well. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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I loved it. It made me very hungry. Well told and beautiful poem about pies. The image and presentation with different colours of font worked great with this piece. A challenging rhyme scheme that you met well. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
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Hooray -- if it made you hungry and made you smile then it accomplished its foremost task!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, Brenda -- good to hear from you, ma'am!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janetsue
This is an absolutely scrumptious posting! My mouth is watering and, if you lived close by, I would absolutely stop by to share some of those beautiful baked pie delights! :-)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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This is an absolutely scrumptious posting! My mouth is watering and, if you lived close by, I would absolutely stop by to share some of those beautiful baked pie delights! :-)
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed this excursion into pie-heaven, Lady Janet -- was certainly a fun exercise to use Robert's new form! ;) Here's wishing you lots of pie and wonderful Holiday Preparations!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
This Zimmerman trido, Yes I'll Share, has the stated formatting and promises that there will be pies upon pies there ar3 syrupy sweet and ready to eat.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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This Zimmerman trido, Yes I'll Share, has the stated formatting and promises that there will be pies upon pies there ar3 syrupy sweet and ready to eat.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanx so very much for stopping by on this one, Bill, and Happy Holiday Preparations to you in your corner of the universe!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
What a truly sweet piece the obvious pun intended very tasty and tempting I think this form was an excellent choice for your poem. Keep it up with these great little teasers
Michael
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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What a truly sweet piece the obvious pun intended very tasty and tempting I think this form was an excellent choice for your poem. Keep it up with these great little teasers
Michael
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Hey - your puns are always welcome here, sir!! ;) :) And thanx so much for your review, Michael - always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Take care and Happy Holiday Preparations to you in your corner of the universe!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from JudyE
I should think you would share. In fact, you should be desperate to share or you'll make yourself ill eating all those goodies! Thanks for a fun read.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I should think you would share. In fact, you should be desperate to share or you'll make yourself ill eating all those goodies! Thanks for a fun read.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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LOL!! :) Thanx so much for your review on this one, Judy.... as we get older, those 'sugar crashes' sure do seem to hit a bit harder, don't they?!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rmocruz
Your humorously yummy, solid rhyme has inspired my craving for something sweet. I'm in luck, for I have an apple pie in the fridge.
Thanks for sharing this worthy club entry.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Your humorously yummy, solid rhyme has inspired my craving for something sweet. I'm in luck, for I have an apple pie in the fridge.
Thanks for sharing this worthy club entry.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Quick! Go cut a piece, warm in the microwave, and break out the vanilla ice cream --- YUM-YUM! :) Thanx so much for your review, Rich -- always so good to hear from you! ;) Take care and Happy Holiday Preparations in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from BeasPeas
I really do like this form. Simple and well rhymed about my favorite topic of pie. Thanks for your description of two very interesting ones in author's note that I must make it a point to try one of these days. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I really do like this form. Simple and well rhymed about my favorite topic of pie. Thanks for your description of two very interesting ones in author's note that I must make it a point to try one of these days. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Oh, once you make a Bayou Goo, Marilyn, you shall never be able to go without... LOL! ;) Thanx so much for your review -- Happy Holiday Preparations to you in your corner of the universe!! ;) Yvette
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Hi Yvette. I read you author's note on both those exotic pie names. I guess the only place to get it is down south. I lived in Tennessee for nearly 10 years. i don't recall having either of these. I DO love all kinds of pie, though. Ummmm! The gooey-er the better.
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Hi Yvette. I read you author's note on both those exotic pie names. I guess the only place to get it is down south. I lived in Tennessee for nearly 10 years. i don't recall having either of these. I DO love all kinds of pie, though. Ummmm! The gooey-er the better.
Comment from lyenochka
Good for you to try Robert's Trido. I was sketching a few but found the three syllables so limiting. Great job on yours and I like the anticipation that comes through these colorful stanzas!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Good for you to try Robert's Trido. I was sketching a few but found the three syllables so limiting. Great job on yours and I like the anticipation that comes through these colorful stanzas!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Hey - you give me something as yummy as pies and I can write any syllables you want! :) LOL! :) Thanx for the review, Helen, and I look forward to yours! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well, who wouldn't want to share those yummy pies? I will say you have done Robert's creation to a tee. Nice yummy poem. Wish they were real right about now.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Well, who wouldn't want to share those yummy pies? I will say you have done Robert's creation to a tee. Nice yummy poem. Wish they were real right about now.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Yep! They even made me a bit hungry even after baking all the ones for Thanxgiving! ;) Thanx so much for your review, ma'am -- glad you enjoyed! ;) Happy Holiday Preparations in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
I love the bombardment of rhyme Yvette, it gives real impetus to the narrative, tongue in cheek, or rather tongue in the pie, a slurpy and very clever rhyming narrative, I must admit I don't know what a three syllable line's called...mono and a half perhaps, well done, good response, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I love the bombardment of rhyme Yvette, it gives real impetus to the narrative, tongue in cheek, or rather tongue in the pie, a slurpy and very clever rhyming narrative, I must admit I don't know what a three syllable line's called...mono and a half perhaps, well done, good response, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Well, if you come up with a name for it, pass it along to Robert -- I was just a dancer to his choreography here! ;) :) Thanx so much for your review, sir, and Happy Holiday Preparations to y'all down/over there! ;) Yvette
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Well done
