The Darkest Night
When life has no more bottom, we finally let go and Let God14 total reviews
Comment from Cherubel
It is a awesome thing to communicate with the world and to share this truth is what comes across as bold and purposeful. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading such a thoughtful peace.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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It is a awesome thing to communicate with the world and to share this truth is what comes across as bold and purposeful. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading such a thoughtful peace.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank for your review and comments. I am honored to receive your six-star review..
Comment from Sally Law
A fine poem, a prayer formed in a time of great spiritual need. The Lord loves these prayers, as I was granted grace and forgiveness the very moment I prayed; He came to me. A fine offering today, dear poet.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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A fine poem, a prayer formed in a time of great spiritual need. The Lord loves these prayers, as I was granted grace and forgiveness the very moment I prayed; He came to me. A fine offering today, dear poet.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Sally, my good friend, thank you and enjoy this coming weekend to its fullest!
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Very sad but beautiful poem. The image and presentation were interesting. You are a good writer and make your point well. I too believe in faith and God He has helped me a great deal. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the prompt contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Very sad but beautiful poem. The image and presentation were interesting. You are a good writer and make your point well. I too believe in faith and God He has helped me a great deal. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the prompt contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Brenda, I am humbled by your motivating words of encouragement.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very pretty poem about when we stand on Judgement Day and realize that our Lord once again has forgiven my sins and He reads my name from the Book of Life!
Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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A very pretty poem about when we stand on Judgement Day and realize that our Lord once again has forgiven my sins and He reads my name from the Book of Life!
Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Patty, thank you, Yes! What a gift to mankind.
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You're welcome!!!!
Patty
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your rondeau is vividly descriptive and reverently spiritual. It implies this question, which I have asked myself several times: "Why do Christians wait till they are desperate before they cry out to the Lord?"
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Your rondeau is vividly descriptive and reverently spiritual. It implies this question, which I have asked myself several times: "Why do Christians wait till they are desperate before they cry out to the Lord?"
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Janice, sadly our egoistic self is relentless in trying to be in charge of all our thought's and actions. I am often in awe of the fact that Christ has never turned his back from mankind. Have a special week!
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautifully crafted piece of spiritual poetry dear anonymous! i think you have managed to successfully convey your faith.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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this is a beautifully crafted piece of spiritual poetry dear anonymous! i think you have managed to successfully convey your faith.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Rebekka, it is a profound journey that we are on with our free will that does get in the way of God's plan far to often.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is a very beautiful spiritual poem. Well written, moving and that repeating of the The Darkest Night is very effective. Lovely open line 'The darkest night of my Soul, my Christ came' - a true spiritual, and very convincing poem. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Hello anon, this is a very beautiful spiritual poem. Well written, moving and that repeating of the The Darkest Night is very effective. Lovely open line 'The darkest night of my Soul, my Christ came' - a true spiritual, and very convincing poem. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Supe
This is far too complex for me to figure out. I have never done a Rondeau so thank you for the notes and explanation.
I found this flowed smoothly throughout with your nice Green Energy Healing Spirit complementing your words.
Not sure if you want to put a comma instead of a period after it has always been. (,) the darkest night - 2nd stanza
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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This is far too complex for me to figure out. I have never done a Rondeau so thank you for the notes and explanation.
I found this flowed smoothly throughout with your nice Green Energy Healing Spirit complementing your words.
Not sure if you want to put a comma instead of a period after it has always been. (,) the darkest night - 2nd stanza
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Yes of course, good catch thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very graceful and full-of-thanx-and-praise offering for this contest -- your lovely flowing rhythm and rhyme make for a very strong contender for a 'spiritual' witness! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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A very graceful and full-of-thanx-and-praise offering for this contest -- your lovely flowing rhythm and rhyme make for a very strong contender for a 'spiritual' witness! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you Yvette.
Comment from Susan Larson
I love your authors note, "When life has no more bottom, we finally let go and Let God." Really, what else can we do? Turning to God is the biggest and best change anyone can experience.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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I love your authors note, "When life has no more bottom, we finally let go and Let God." Really, what else can we do? Turning to God is the biggest and best change anyone can experience.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Susan, yes!
