Her Bronco-rider Lover
She thought he'd be good in the saddle.9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, Her Bronco-ride Lover, has the correct syllable count and makes for a negative love-making comparison when one's bucking ability is short lived.
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This thirty-syllable poem, Her Bronco-ride Lover, has the correct syllable count and makes for a negative love-making comparison when one's bucking ability is short lived.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It flows well with informative information about rodeos. It rhymes well and thank you for providing your author notes. Your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes!
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I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It flows well with informative information about rodeos. It rhymes well and thank you for providing your author notes. Your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a cute and funny entry for the 30 Syllables contest.
Your short verse tells a clear cowboy lover story.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a cute and funny entry for the 30 Syllables contest.
Your short verse tells a clear cowboy lover story.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
Comment from C.M. Fife
Ooh, juicy. I like the humor displayed in this piece. I don't normally blush but you got me. Well done. Hopefully the protagonist finds herself a better companion who can "ride through." Lol
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Ooh, juicy. I like the humor displayed in this piece. I don't normally blush but you got me. Well done. Hopefully the protagonist finds herself a better companion who can "ride through." Lol
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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... or get a whole lot of them one after the other so the seconds add up, but the thought of that might make you blush even more!
I appreciate your review, thank you.
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Oh I may blush but that doesn't mean I disapprove 😈
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, 8 seconds sounds like a disappointment in the saddle anywhere but when they pull that gate, yeah??! ;) :) LOL!! ;) A fun offering for this contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Well, 8 seconds sounds like a disappointment in the saddle anywhere but when they pull that gate, yeah??! ;) :) LOL!! ;) A fun offering for this contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thirty word flash fiction about the bronco rider that seems he is not as good with the sport as he pretended to be. He made it for eight seconds inn the saddle.
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A very well-written thirty word flash fiction about the bronco rider that seems he is not as good with the sport as he pretended to be. He made it for eight seconds inn the saddle.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
If you say so, but I get 31 and will leave it to the CEC make the final call. This is clever in its word play and content. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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If you say so, but I get 31 and will leave it to the CEC make the final call. This is clever in its word play and content. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thanks for the syllable check. I put the poem in various online counters and one even said 28 syllables! How can we trust them!! I did another count and you were right (of course), so I dropped a single syllable word.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm loving the rhymes here as I felt I was on that gyrating rodeo! But realistically I would never go on one of these machines, or on a real bucking bronco! Far too dangerous! This write is a gem, flows off the tongue and a joy to read, love Dolly x
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I'm loving the rhymes here as I felt I was on that gyrating rodeo! But realistically I would never go on one of these machines, or on a real bucking bronco! Far too dangerous! This write is a gem, flows off the tongue and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very clever play on words and very funny. My kind of humour. I love it. Wishing you lots of luck in the 30 syllable competition. Best wishes. Jen.
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This is a very clever play on words and very funny. My kind of humour. I love it. Wishing you lots of luck in the 30 syllable competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
