The Wrong Shop?
Woman makes big mistake16 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Aussie. It's a tongue twister for sure. The humor in it is fun. I can just hear this conversation. Of curse the salesman doesn't want to miss out on a sale. The ending is a clever twist. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Aussie. It's a tongue twister for sure. The humor in it is fun. I can just hear this conversation. Of curse the salesman doesn't want to miss out on a sale. The ending is a clever twist. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello Jan, Thanks so much for reading. Thought I would give all of you a giggle. Love, Kace.
Comment from Sasha
This is a well written and excellent entry for this Dialogue Only Writing Contest. I found it clever and quite amusing. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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This is a well written and excellent entry for this Dialogue Only Writing Contest. I found it clever and quite amusing. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hi Sasha, Thanks for reading and glad you got a laugh. Love, Kace.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Kace, this is a real hoot. I laboured through the tongue-twisters at the beginning LOL! An amusing read that follows the requirements for the contest perfectly and I wish you luck. Hope all is well with you. You sound perky, judging by your writing LOL. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello Kace, this is a real hoot. I laboured through the tongue-twisters at the beginning LOL! An amusing read that follows the requirements for the contest perfectly and I wish you luck. Hope all is well with you. You sound perky, judging by your writing LOL. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello Dorothy, Thanks for reading. A change of pace for me. I'm OK, learning to cope on my own. Love, Kace.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a complete and entertaining story using dialog only. The content is clever with its use of alliteration and witty word play. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a complete and entertaining story using dialog only. The content is clever with its use of alliteration and witty word play. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello my sweet friend, hope you got your tongue untwisted? Thanks a lot. Love, Kace.
Comment from royowen
I think you've written a marvellous entry in this dialogue only contes, this sounds like one-of those adds straight out of the specsavers adds we have locally, well dine, a super entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I think you've written a marvellous entry in this dialogue only contes, this sounds like one-of those adds straight out of the specsavers adds we have locally, well dine, a super entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you Roy and I wish you a blessed Christmas with all your lovely family. Love, Kay.
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Bless you too Kay,
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love this, Kay! Should have gone to Specsavers, lol. I went a few weeks ago. This is a fun dialogue only story, and all told in a flash fiction style. Many of us pretend our sight is perfect the same as we do with our hearing. I think half of it is vanity. Well one with this one, my friend and good luck in the contest. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I love this, Kay! Should have gone to Specsavers, lol. I went a few weeks ago. This is a fun dialogue only story, and all told in a flash fiction style. Many of us pretend our sight is perfect the same as we do with our hearing. I think half of it is vanity. Well one with this one, my friend and good luck in the contest. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hello Mrs Seagull! sent your card today. Hope it doesn't go astray!
Glad you got a giggle. This will be my first Christmas on my own. I try to keep busy. Much love, Kay.
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The first Christmas alone is always the hardest. You remember what it was like last year. Give Toby an extra pressy and loads of hugs. :) Your card will be going in the post today with all the other cards going abroad. Big hugs my friend. xxxx Hey, I've posted a happy poem, it might cheer you up. xxx
