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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
These have to be published, Bill, they would give everyone a laugh, and cheer them up. This is another fabulous funny one, with a brilliant come-back at the end! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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These have to be published, Bill, they would give everyone a laugh, and cheer them up. This is another fabulous funny one, with a brilliant come-back at the end! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from jessizero
This was cute. I would probably not like having a famous name, either. It could become annoying. I like how your Lois handled Jimmy. It was funny. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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This was cute. I would probably not like having a famous name, either. It could become annoying. I like how your Lois handled Jimmy. It was funny. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Jessizero. You'll find links to the other short stories in this book. There are ninety-five and all are somewhat promoted for the next week.
Comment from MamaBebop
I just love when women who are cat-called get the last word!! Thank you for this laugh out loud flash. It is difficult to get a story across in 75 words, but you did it masterfully. I loved it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, MB.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I just love when women who are cat-called get the last word!! Thank you for this laugh out loud flash. It is difficult to get a story across in 75 words, but you did it masterfully. I loved it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, MB.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thanks, MB, for giving this a look and for the exceptional rating. Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahaha -- way to go, Lois. I love to read about women who won't be bullied. Your protagonist gave the kind of response Jimmy wouldn't be expecting. Excellent story. Best of luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Hahaha -- way to go, Lois. I love to read about women who won't be bullied. Your protagonist gave the kind of response Jimmy wouldn't be expecting. Excellent story. Best of luck in the booth.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Dawn.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a good flash fiction story, Bill. Lois gave the wise-cracker guy a good put down. Clearly written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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This is a good flash fiction story, Bill. Lois gave the wise-cracker guy a good put down. Clearly written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is a really good one. It's hard to tell a complete story in just seventy five words, but I think you've done a good job of accomplishing just that. (and I had to write more words than that to do this review!)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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This is a really good one. It's hard to tell a complete story in just seventy five words, but I think you've done a good job of accomplishing just that. (and I had to write more words than that to do this review!)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill!
Comment from JudyE
This is a worthy entry for the 75 word flash fiction contest, and has a nice twist at the end. I guess those with such names come in for quite a bit of teasing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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This is a worthy entry for the 75 word flash fiction contest, and has a nice twist at the end. I guess those with such names come in for quite a bit of teasing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thanks, Judy
Comment from nomi338
When he finally gets what she old him, he will no doubt get angry. Idiots like that are always late to recognize that they have been thoroughly dissed by someone with superior intellect.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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When he finally gets what she old him, he will no doubt get angry. Idiots like that are always late to recognize that they have been thoroughly dissed by someone with superior intellect.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Jimmy's a dimmy.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Good for Lois to keeping the sense of humor going! :) A fun offering for this one, Sir Bill ... to bad we don't get to see funny Jimmy's reaction! ;) LOL! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Good for Lois to keeping the sense of humor going! :) A fun offering for this one, Sir Bill ... to bad we don't get to see funny Jimmy's reaction! ;) LOL! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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He said, ?Oh yeah??
Comment from Mistydawn
I love how she turned it around, made him look like a fool, lol. I'm sure that wasn't what he was expecting at all, lol. It's well-written, interesting, realistic. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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I love how she turned it around, made him look like a fool, lol. I'm sure that wasn't what he was expecting at all, lol. It's well-written, interesting, realistic. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thanks, MD