Secret Scars
A 30 syllable poem...13 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Hi dear Diana,
Your haunting message and theme here is most heart wrenching
and so true. There is no definitive expiration date on time
involved in, nor does it remove or lessen the invisable scars
that linger, when trust in a relationship is broken. Your
daunting photo and video deeply heightens and empasizes
the needed and yearning efffect and reprieve sought through
songs of love and return of physical touch and reaffirmation.
Love the Lady Gaga vid and song "Heal Me'..perfect for
this astounding presentation.
Love, blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Hi dear Diana,
Your haunting message and theme here is most heart wrenching
and so true. There is no definitive expiration date on time
involved in, nor does it remove or lessen the invisable scars
that linger, when trust in a relationship is broken. Your
daunting photo and video deeply heightens and empasizes
the needed and yearning efffect and reprieve sought through
songs of love and return of physical touch and reaffirmation.
Love the Lady Gaga vid and song "Heal Me'..perfect for
this astounding presentation.
Love, blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Thank you Ronni! These reflections of life and love are my favorite to write! Appreciate you enjoyed it! I love being able to add videos giving the poems just the right touch! xoxo
Comment from Liz O'Neill
One of the most important aspe4ct of healing is to have a supportive person or group. This poem is good to invite the reader in to reflect on who they have for support and more importantly, who they give support to. It is in giving support that we grow and reap a hundred-fold. Well written.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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One of the most important aspe4ct of healing is to have a supportive person or group. This poem is good to invite the reader in to reflect on who they have for support and more importantly, who they give support to. It is in giving support that we grow and reap a hundred-fold. Well written.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Amen! you said it all right there! appreciate you stopped to read! xoxo!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt.
Your short verse tells about secret scars and the video is lovely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt.
Your short verse tells about secret scars and the video is lovely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks Sharon, these are not easy to write for sure! haha! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, Secret Scars, has the correct syllable count and finds that the past holds pain that still has an effect on the present.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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This thirty-syllable poem, Secret Scars, has the correct syllable count and finds that the past holds pain that still has an effect on the present.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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thanks Bill! appreciate you stopped to read and enjoy! xoxo
Comment from Joan E.
What a striking artwork you selected to complement your 30 Syllables! I admired your addition of rhyme and alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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What a striking artwork you selected to complement your 30 Syllables! I admired your addition of rhyme and alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much Joan! appreciate your kind words! xoxo
Comment from angel123
You choose a beautiful illustration to enhance your message. I enjoyed reading your well written poem. It flows with emotion from the heart. Good alliteration of s letters and sounds. You followed the syllable count. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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You choose a beautiful illustration to enhance your message. I enjoyed reading your well written poem. It flows with emotion from the heart. Good alliteration of s letters and sounds. You followed the syllable count. Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you sincerely for your kind words! xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thirty syllables poem about the secret scars we gathered over the years while walking on paths we shouldn't be tread upon, sometimes there are only nine person who can help us see the good within the bad.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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A very well-written thirty syllables poem about the secret scars we gathered over the years while walking on paths we shouldn't be tread upon, sometimes there are only nine person who can help us see the good within the bad.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much! Your kind review means a lot! :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned piece in exactly 30 syllables. The content is poignant in its despair mixed with a glimmer of hope tone. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned piece in exactly 30 syllables. The content is poignant in its despair mixed with a glimmer of hope tone. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your kind review! :)
Comment from tammy novella
A beautifully written heartfelt poem. May God heal whoever is hurting. He is the only one that can. The poetry flows from the heart. I enjoyed this very much and the picture goes well with the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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A beautifully written heartfelt poem. May God heal whoever is hurting. He is the only one that can. The poetry flows from the heart. I enjoyed this very much and the picture goes well with the poem.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. Yes, God is the only one who can heal and love is His avenue! Have a blessed day! xoxo
Comment from Supe
This is well done. I enjoyed it. Your picture to complement your words is perfect. The added song at the end was a bonus. I have not heard that before. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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This is well done. I enjoyed it. Your picture to complement your words is perfect. The added song at the end was a bonus. I have not heard that before. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for you kind review! The song is from the newest version of ?A Star Is Born! An excellent movie if you have not seen! Have a blessed day!
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I haven't seen the new Star is Born so thank you for that and you are so welcome.
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xoxo!!!
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you are welcome.
