Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is interesting. It flows with humor and you followed the syllable count. Your artwork choice is also interesting. Best wishes in the contest vote.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019

Thanks for the review angel. it does remind me of the story about the emperor obviously standing naked to the world, as his weak advisers gush and compliment his finery. It takes the honest mind of a child to tell the truth.. regardless, cheers

Comment from Supe

Excellent

Well done. 30 syllables perfect. Good luck in the contest. This wasn't an easy task, but you did a good job of it. Interesting take on emperor trump.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Naked as a jaybird he be. Thanks for the review, cheers,

reply by Supe on 01-Dec-2019

you are welcome.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt.
You tell the story of a blind Trump very well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Thanks for the review Sharon, it was a fun write, cheers.