Teaching Hands
30 Syllable Poem41 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
What a wonder way to remind us that kindness is the way to go. Cruelty teaches people to be lonely and resentful. They learn to not trust love.
Good luck with the prompt contest
Keep writing
Joan
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What a wonder way to remind us that kindness is the way to go. Cruelty teaches people to be lonely and resentful. They learn to not trust love.
Good luck with the prompt contest
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a wise sentiment here, Monica. Sadly we are in a culture at the moment that models cruelty as strength and kindness is ridiculed as weak. It really is befuddling, because that fact doesn't seem to be seen.
Excellent words of wisdom here and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
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Such a wise sentiment here, Monica. Sadly we are in a culture at the moment that models cruelty as strength and kindness is ridiculed as weak. It really is befuddling, because that fact doesn't seem to be seen.
Excellent words of wisdom here and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
Comment from Alchera
The poem perfectly fits within the 30 syllables contest required and the beautiful comparison of
its well exposed narrration storyline in verses. Blessings from Italy
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The poem perfectly fits within the 30 syllables contest required and the beautiful comparison of
its well exposed narrration storyline in verses. Blessings from Italy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
Comment from Rmocruz
Your syllable count is point on. Your well chosen words read like an enlightening proverb. The visual art selection does well to complement your theme.
A well crafted writing prompt entry.
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Your syllable count is point on. Your well chosen words read like an enlightening proverb. The visual art selection does well to complement your theme.
A well crafted writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
Teaching Hands is a well written 30-syllable poem. The message is thoughtful and profound. The artwork compliments the piece perfectly.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Teaching Hands is a well written 30-syllable poem. The message is thoughtful and profound. The artwork compliments the piece perfectly.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from estory
You created some nice contrast here between the hard hand and the soft hand, and we see them at the same time kind of intertwined. You have that soft hand trying to undue what the hard hand is doing. overall there were some nice musical and rhythmic effects in there. estory
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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You created some nice contrast here between the hard hand and the soft hand, and we see them at the same time kind of intertwined. You have that soft hand trying to undue what the hard hand is doing. overall there were some nice musical and rhythmic effects in there. estory
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the powerful message conveyed in this and appreciate it. They're words to live by. Thanks for sharing this very inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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I love the powerful message conveyed in this and appreciate it. They're words to live by. Thanks for sharing this very inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sanku
The difference between hard hands and soft hands...This is a good topic and you have made the distinction between the two attitudes very clear. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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The difference between hard hands and soft hands...This is a good topic and you have made the distinction between the two attitudes very clear. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, Teaching Hands, has the correct syllable count and seems to say that lessons pushed onto one are seldom as effective as those wrapped around and discussed.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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This thirty-syllable poem, Teaching Hands, has the correct syllable count and seems to say that lessons pushed onto one are seldom as effective as those wrapped around and discussed.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Good job at this 30 syllable poem! I think it's not as easy as one might think. But you did it! I hope you do well in the contest! Good luck!
PATTY
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Good job at this 30 syllable poem! I think it's not as easy as one might think. But you did it! I hope you do well in the contest! Good luck!
PATTY
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
