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Thoughts About Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Silent Love"
My Collection of Love Poetry

9 total reviews 
Comment from Rikki66
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Good luck with the entry. The truest form of love is shown not spoken/
Rikki********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
    I think you?re a sensitive guy. You must be a good husband. Thanks for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by Rikki66 on 03-Dec-2019
    I was a good lover now I am a grouch.
    Rikki
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
    I?m sorry to read that - not appreciated?
reply by Rikki66 on 03-Dec-2019
    Depression and the Christmas blues.
    Rikki
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
    The holiday period gets a lot of people ?down? Think of the real reason for Christmas
    and in a while it will be
    back less stress. Happy Rikki again!
reply by Rikki66 on 03-Dec-2019
    The reason for the season cheers me, my passed away parents depresses.
    Rikki
reply by Rikki66 on 03-Dec-2019
    The reason for the season cheers me, my passed away parents depresses.
    Rikki
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is such a cute picture and I can see why you felt compelled to write about it, this gives us all hope and animals often show their affection to each other, much enjoyed Trisha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Thanks, Dolly! I appreciated your kind review.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
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You may have a winner here, Trisha. I like the novelty of your internal and external rhymes. Your words are such a creative way to bring that photo to life.
I definitely would not change a thing about this entry. It's perfect as is. Good luck with the committee. Hopefully they will appreciate your entry like I do.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    I seriously doubt that! You?re such a supportive reviewer/ friend. Thanks so much, I?m glad you enjoyed the poem
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written two-line poem about showing love to a dear one needs no words the action of love speaks for itself. An excellent photo to complement your two line poem.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Thanks for reviewing kindly, Sandra
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from RodG
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Some lovers can truly communicate without speaking, but with a touch or a smile. The man referred to here appears to have that gift. Good luck in this contest. Rod

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    I think silent is sexier than words. The emotional swell is great! Thanks for your good luck wishes,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Therese Caron
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I love this and the picture that you chose is absolutely perfect to illustrate your poem.And I know squirrels can be a nuisance, but are also very interesting to watch.This little poem can be taken at face value, or we can read more into it and apply it to people. After all, it is not really what we say, but how we act, that shows real love. Great poem, wonderful idea.

Terry C.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Terry, your complimentary review was much appreciated. Reader enjoyment is the winner for me!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned nd technically sound Two Line Poem. The content is sweet and emotionally uplifting. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    I appreciate your review. It was harder to write than I thought, so your compliments made my day!
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alex Rosel
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I like this poem. The line "love spoken without voice" conveys a nice concept. I wish you the best of luck with the judges; I think, as always, the competition will be hotly contested.

The image you've chosen to accompany your poem looks photoshopped, but it's none the less effective for that.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    I?m sure that the image was technically thought up by an artificial virtual graphic designer, delivered digitally. But the heartfelt love behind the image was real. LOL
    I write as a challenge to myself, and yes external competition is fierce. For me, reader positive reviews are my prize. Thanks so much,
    Hugs, Trisha.
Comment from Gloria ....
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What a cute picture, and yes so much is communicated without a single word being said.

Neat internal rhymes and external rhymes and a great entry into this contest.

Best of luck to you with the Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Thanks Gloria! Your appreciation of the poem means more than a win In the contest
    Hugs, Trisha