Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku of the ocean, Ribbons of Foam Lace, uses seventeen syllables and gives a light reference to sea foam which hints to a missing frill from times passing.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019

Thanks for the insightful review. i love beach combing, cheers.

Comment from Helena Frances

Excellent

Just voted for this:) The picture is perfect and brings back warm memories as snow covers my beaches , and the worn pebbles:)
A beach with snow is beautiful, but not as inviting .

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review and vote. A snowy beach sounds like an oxymoron. Cheers.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A very descriptive write, delicately woven with lace and pebbles and I enjoyed the effect, you painted a unique picture of the foamy ocean hitting the sand and pebbles on the shore, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019

Thanks for the insightful review Dolly.
In Zanzibar, the waves were so pretty with delicate foam that would remind me of lace. Have a great weekend, cheers.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Haiku - Ocean writing prompt.
Your short verse gives a wonderful description of the ocean.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019

Thanks for the review Sharon. I loved to watch the sunrise in Zanzibar with the soft waves gently breaking on the beach. Mesmerized, sipping coffee. cheers.