The Endless Seas
Minute Poetry contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Minute poem about a poet who allow the sea guide his thoughts and moods to write what drifts to him while he is deep in thought the words become clear and his refuge is there.
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A very well-written Minute poem about a poet who allow the sea guide his thoughts and moods to write what drifts to him while he is deep in thought the words become clear and his refuge is there.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and gracious stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
Deep itself as said about the ocean. I have always enjoyed reading your verse DS
I sail amid the endless seas
with grace and ease.
The waves and tide,
this poet's guide.
Wonderfully penned.
Best wishes in the contest
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Deep itself as said about the ocean. I have always enjoyed reading your verse DS
I sail amid the endless seas
with grace and ease.
The waves and tide,
this poet's guide.
Wonderfully penned.
Best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Michael. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I love the minute form and how it flows, so that's actually where this idea came from. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from LyndaS
...There's refuge here.. What a breezy, beautiful entry into this contest. Can I borrow your muse? You were truly inspired. My mind is never this peaceful or focused. This is a perfect minute poem that I predict will do well. Great job! Lynda
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...There's refuge here.. What a breezy, beautiful entry into this contest. Can I borrow your muse? You were truly inspired. My mind is never this peaceful or focused. This is a perfect minute poem that I predict will do well. Great job! Lynda
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Oh, I find that hard to believe. Reading some of your work, I'm sure you're focused like this as well. It's like we might even share the same muse. Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review and big six, Lynda. I'm glad you liked my little minute. have a great day. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a technically sound Minute Poem with flawless meter and rhyme scheme; correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is of universal appeal to this particular group of viewers as it has a strong emphasis on the art of writing. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a technically sound Minute Poem with flawless meter and rhyme scheme; correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is of universal appeal to this particular group of viewers as it has a strong emphasis on the art of writing. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Hey, MA, hello. Thank you so much for the great review and gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little offering. I appreciate the good luck wishes. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Great writing. Love the minute poem. The picture is also very gorgeous. To sail the endless seas and explore the waters is a very exciting setting. I enjoyed taking a cruise...was breathtaking until the water got rocky.
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Great writing. Love the minute poem. The picture is also very gorgeous. To sail the endless seas and explore the waters is a very exciting setting. I enjoyed taking a cruise...was breathtaking until the water got rocky.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Hopefully it didn't get too rocky there. Lol. Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Rosemary. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Darlene Franklin
An ocean of thoughts and words to choose from. I love the way you pulled it together in this minute poem. Wishing you good luck with your contest entry.
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An ocean of thoughts and words to choose from. I love the way you pulled it together in this minute poem. Wishing you good luck with your contest entry.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Darlene. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
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You're welcome--Darlene
Comment from Pantygynt
This is the third minute I have read today, and you have some stiff competition in this contest. This example should be capable of holding its own in the race for literary immortality.
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This is the third minute I have read today, and you have some stiff competition in this contest. This example should be capable of holding its own in the race for literary immortality.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Lol. I hope so. Thank you for the great review, Pantygynt. I always appreciate the stars and unique reviews, friend. Have a great night. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Susan Larson
I'm intrigued by the thought of 'The waves and tide,
this poet's guide.
I free the helm to search and drift' allowing the water to be your muse. This has put me in a sea of deep though.
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I'm intrigued by the thought of 'The waves and tide,
this poet's guide.
I free the helm to search and drift' allowing the water to be your muse. This has put me in a sea of deep though.
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Yes, I do that a lot, just let my mind drift and follow where it goes. Thank you so much for the excellent review and the gracious stars, Susan. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is so well written and magical and I enjoyed every word, a perfectly formed Minute with good rhyming and sentiments, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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This is so well written and magical and I enjoyed every word, a perfectly formed Minute with good rhyming and sentiments, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the kind review, Dolly. I appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a wonderful day and thank you again.
Ron
