Don't Stir Up The Locals
A peaceful country stroll in 5-7-54 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Don't Stir Up the Locals, has the right set up and uses these two homonyms in a good way to make the written scene almost as funny as this graphic.
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This humorous 5-7-5, Don't Stir Up the Locals, has the right set up and uses these two homonyms in a good way to make the written scene almost as funny as this graphic.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like your clever word play, one of my favorite entertainments. This poem also has good tongue-in-cheek humor, my favorite kind of humor. Wow, you're hitting 2 for 2 with me on this one. I am voting for this one.
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I like your clever word play, one of my favorite entertainments. This poem also has good tongue-in-cheek humor, my favorite kind of humor. Wow, you're hitting 2 for 2 with me on this one. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a wonderfully humorous 5-7-5, my friend. I love the plays on words in the last line. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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This is a wonderfully humorous 5-7-5, my friend. I love the plays on words in the last line. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
Comment from JudyE
Haha, mystery writer. That's a clever last line. It wouldn't be funny mixing it with an enraged bull/s. This is a very worthy humorous 5-7-5 so best of luck in the contest.
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Haha, mystery writer. That's a clever last line. It wouldn't be funny mixing it with an enraged bull/s. This is a very worthy humorous 5-7-5 so best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
