Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patricia. This is a nice poem. I like the contrast in wording with the awakening of the morning and the sun shouting. Since you're living in the sunbelt in Arizona, I expect the sun does shout. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019

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Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Paricia,
Dawn is a beautiful and hopeful time. It reminds you of joy and beauty of life. I like the personificiation.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019

Thank you for the lovely review.

reply by dragonpoet on 30-Nov-2019

You are most kindly welcome.
Joan

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a gorgeous picture. Your poem is very well-written. Your great word choice, description lets the reader picture a beautiful morning in their minds. Nice job, good luck with your contest.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019

Thank you for the nice review.

Comment from BrooklynnPreston

Excellent

Very beautiful font, color scheme, and illustration. You always make the most beautiful work, tying your words together like a dazzling bow. Happy Thanksgiving! God Bless.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What a spectacular picture of dawn you selected! I enjoyed your personifying the "rising sun" and having it shout a strong greeting. I hope your day starts like this tomorrow. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello Patricia. This is a beautiful and uplifting verse. I like it that you shared these inspirational thoughts with us and its a perfect entry for this prompt. Good luck, my friend.

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your well-written, exuberant poem is uplifting, conveying a moving
message about the power of dawn and the sounds of that time of day.
Good use of personification

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019

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Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Well, good morning to you too Pat.
That was a very cheery poem to start the day.
Couldn't think of a better time of day, when everything
is as it should be.
Great one Pat.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

Looks like you have perfect syllable counts here. I get some personification here with the dawn sun being able to shout. Quite a glorious photo with colors going on there. It is a very accessible poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Great entry for the four line poetry contest, and best of luck. Your presentation is bright and cheerful, as fitting for the new day you describe. Great image of the sun shouting "Good Morning." This should do extremely well in the contest. Happy Thanksgiving. judi

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019

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reply by judiverse on 29-Nov-2019

You're very welcome. judi