Dear God......
A Prayer to God11 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Willie, this is a very lovely spiritual poem using simple requests to God that turn into a lovely piece of writing.
If in the final analysis,
I don't measure up to your plan,
I tried to do my best,
I am but a mortal man.......... A humble statement at the end of a lovely poem. Good Luck Willie - warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Hello Willie, this is a very lovely spiritual poem using simple requests to God that turn into a lovely piece of writing.
If in the final analysis,
I don't measure up to your plan,
I tried to do my best,
I am but a mortal man.......... A humble statement at the end of a lovely poem. Good Luck Willie - warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Dorothy, for your nice review and stars.
Comment from Bobby Jo
nice. The bible says we all fall short to the glory of God. But by believing in Jesus at the cross and believing he died for our sins and confess that he is God's son, we will be saved. I believe it is us, who worry about getting to heaven, are the ones who will be there. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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nice. The bible says we all fall short to the glory of God. But by believing in Jesus at the cross and believing he died for our sins and confess that he is God's son, we will be saved. I believe it is us, who worry about getting to heaven, are the ones who will be there. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Bobby, I appreciate your review and stars.
Comment from Therese Caron
I love this poem!Every single line is written beautifully and you make wonderful points. My favorite is the very beginning - just let me touch your hand. That is so powerful to me. In the last 15 years, I have had to truly rely on God to get by emotionally. This poem just really hits home. And I like that you did not put in a picture.This poem is a prayer, and did not need a picture. I have no sixes left or I would give you one.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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I love this poem!Every single line is written beautifully and you make wonderful points. My favorite is the very beginning - just let me touch your hand. That is so powerful to me. In the last 15 years, I have had to truly rely on God to get by emotionally. This poem just really hits home. And I like that you did not put in a picture.This poem is a prayer, and did not need a picture. I have no sixes left or I would give you one.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Therese, for your very kind review and stars.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Dear God", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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"Dear God", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your very kind review and stars, much appreciated.
You're more than welcome.
Comment from kahpot
Very well written and said, yes we are but mortal man given to mistakes, but stand so proud of what we have tried to do and to those who helped us, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Very well written and said, yes we are but mortal man given to mistakes, but stand so proud of what we have tried to do and to those who helped us, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review and stars.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very humble and heartfelt plea to God that stirs the heart. How are we to know what is adequate in His eyes. The mystery can only keep us striving to do our best.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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A very humble and heartfelt plea to God that stirs the heart. How are we to know what is adequate in His eyes. The mystery can only keep us striving to do our best.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you Raffaelina for your very nice review and stars.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Spiritual writing prompt.
Your verse is lovely but you have one little typo: After nmy final stand, "nmy"
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Spiritual writing prompt.
Your verse is lovely but you have one little typo: After nmy final stand, "nmy"
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Sharon, for the very nice review and stars.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I love the lines, do with me as you will/just let me touch your hand. Oh, to always accept God's will with that degree of peace, as the days pass. I look forward to heaven, when the trials will be over.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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I love the lines, do with me as you will/just let me touch your hand. Oh, to always accept God's will with that degree of peace, as the days pass. I look forward to heaven, when the trials will be over.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much, Darlene for the nice review and stars.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
If I don;t go to Heaven (semicolon should be an apostrophe)
After nmy final stand, Remove the n in front of 'my'
A well worded spiritual poem, my friend. Just a couple easy to fix spags. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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If I don;t go to Heaven (semicolon should be an apostrophe)
After nmy final stand, Remove the n in front of 'my'
A well worded spiritual poem, my friend. Just a couple easy to fix spags. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Debbie, for the very nice review and stars. Corrections made.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written prayer to God in humble honesty we pray to God daily for guidance in our life path. Sometimes we cannot hear, so well and then we go wrong but He will always welcome us when we turn to Him.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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A very well-written prayer to God in humble honesty we pray to God daily for guidance in our life path. Sometimes we cannot hear, so well and then we go wrong but He will always welcome us when we turn to Him.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Sandra for the very nice review and stars.
