Get thee to a nunnery, go.
Chased, yet chaste50 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Tony, that was brilliant! I wish I could give you a six, I love it. What a delightful play on words, a winner certainly in my book! The title you found in Hamlet, is perfect. Very well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Tony, that was brilliant! I wish I could give you a six, I love it. What a delightful play on words, a winner certainly in my book! The title you found in Hamlet, is perfect. Very well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thanks very much, Sandra. Too good a pun to resist! All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Hitcher
I seriously can not understand why anyone would voluntarily choose to not taste, touch, feel, the emotional connection, release, pleasure of being with another person. BUT each to their own : ) Good luck !!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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I seriously can not understand why anyone would voluntarily choose to not taste, touch, feel, the emotional connection, release, pleasure of being with another person. BUT each to their own : ) Good luck !!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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My sentiments entirely.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is an excellent 5-7-5, my friend. I like the combination of chase/unchastened, and chaste. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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This is an excellent 5-7-5, my friend. I like the combination of chase/unchastened, and chaste. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Debbie. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the good wishes. Tony
Comment from lyenochka
That's quite a story told in just a 5-7-5 poem, Tony! But to go to a nunnery seems quite extreme unless she felt she had a calling. Good use of alliteration and various forms of -chas- words! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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That's quite a story told in just a 5-7-5 poem, Tony! But to go to a nunnery seems quite extreme unless she felt she had a calling. Good use of alliteration and various forms of -chas- words! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Helen. Extreme, indeed. Thanks for your review and good wishes. Tony
Comment from kahpot
Very well written and very clever, I like the way you have used these words telling a story in so few, an excellent 5-7-5 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Very well written and very clever, I like the way you have used these words telling a story in so few, an excellent 5-7-5 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Kahpot. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
Is this about Ophelia? Interesting concept for a short short entry for the contest. When I first saw the picture I thought it was the Virgin Mary, but maybe it is a nun.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Is this about Ophelia? Interesting concept for a short short entry for the contest. When I first saw the picture I thought it was the Virgin Mary, but maybe it is a nun.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Susan. No, it's not about Ophelia. Just a bit of homophonic nonsense. The accompanying image on Wikimedia was titled Medieval_Nun_or_Woman_in_Religious_Clothing
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is lovely and fun and it tells a story, all in a 5-7-5 style poem. What a joy to read such clever usage of the words, "chased" and "chaste". It is humorous in a gentle way, yet speaks in reverence of a woman's choices in life. She sounds like she has her wits about her, and knows where she stands in this world, and within herself. This is a pleasure to read and review. I hope you get many views and reviews. This is a great 5-7-5 poem. Well written with a worthy message.
Take care, Jesse
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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This is lovely and fun and it tells a story, all in a 5-7-5 style poem. What a joy to read such clever usage of the words, "chased" and "chaste". It is humorous in a gentle way, yet speaks in reverence of a woman's choices in life. She sounds like she has her wits about her, and knows where she stands in this world, and within herself. This is a pleasure to read and review. I hope you get many views and reviews. This is a great 5-7-5 poem. Well written with a worthy message.
Take care, Jesse
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks. Jesse. I always appreciate the care that you take with your reviews. Thank you for your generous comments. I hope you're keeping well. All good wishes, Tony
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Hello Tony.
I appreciate your kindness toward me, and am glad you like my reviews. I am well, thank you for asking. I hope all is well with you, too.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Sankey
Haha this is sure a real laugh. Reminded me of a joke a friend share awhile ago. Will share later.Still wants a lot more. Could have added the joke I guess. Along the same lines as this.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Haha this is sure a real laugh. Reminded me of a joke a friend share awhile ago. Will share later.Still wants a lot more. Could have added the joke I guess. Along the same lines as this.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Geoffrey. I don't usually go in for these contests. Glad this gave you a laugh. I appreciate the sixth star. Most generous. That's better than a star for every three words! LOL
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Will share that joke with ya later.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Go thee to a nunnery, go." is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. This is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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"Go thee to a nunnery, go." is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. This is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Duchess, for the shining six and your kind words. All good wishes, Tony
You're welcome Tony.
You definitely deserved both.
All good wishes to you too,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever play on words here Tony, I have never understood why women join a nunnery as we can all pray and be close to God and still lead fulfilling lives, a fine 5-7-5, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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A clever play on words here Tony, I have never understood why women join a nunnery as we can all pray and be close to God and still lead fulfilling lives, a fine 5-7-5, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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It does seem to be a cop out on living.
Enforced celibacy has led otherwise good people to commit heinous crimes. My view, anyway.
