Bird Song
Missing spring and those lively songs.8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh how I love the bird song each morning as the sun rises, they never fail us! I enjoyed your words here reminding me of their tuneful warbles, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
Oh how I love the bird song each morning as the sun rises, they never fail us! I enjoyed your words here reminding me of their tuneful warbles, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
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Thanks Dolly, for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-10-2 poem about the bird song that stopped early mornings as winter approaching. Looking forward to hear the early morning chirps as Spring gets closer. The first birds start chirping at 4Am here in summer time.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
A very well-written 2-10-2 poem about the bird song that stopped early mornings as winter approaching. Looking forward to hear the early morning chirps as Spring gets closer. The first birds start chirping at 4Am here in summer time.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks Sandra.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely verse for the 2-10-2 writing prompt.
Your short verse reminds us that we are ending one season with spring on the way.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
I think this is a lovely verse for the 2-10-2 writing prompt.
Your short verse reminds us that we are ending one season with spring on the way.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you I appreciate your review very much.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely piece about how certain elements of spring are especially missed when the cold months come. The artwork is beautiful.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely piece about how certain elements of spring are especially missed when the cold months come. The artwork is beautiful.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from amada
This poem is sure a delight to read aloud, the musicality in the vowels is lovely, and the theme is soft and universal. I truly enjoyed your work today.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
This poem is sure a delight to read aloud, the musicality in the vowels is lovely, and the theme is soft and universal. I truly enjoyed your work today.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, the sound of birds singing is very soothing, this is a wonderful short poem, love the photo, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
Excellent, the sound of birds singing is very soothing, this is a wonderful short poem, love the photo, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you
Comment from zanya
Such a delightful poetic reminder here in this 2-10-2 format of the song of birds -quieter now during Nature's dormant season - but what a joy to look forward to as winter nears its end
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
Such a delightful poetic reminder here in this 2-10-2 format of the song of birds -quieter now during Nature's dormant season - but what a joy to look forward to as winter nears its end
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, how we miss them, don't we?! I've got but a few at the feeders these days and most are not the 'big singers' from the Spring/Summer!! ;) :) Good syllable count -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
Oh, how we miss them, don't we?! I've got but a few at the feeders these days and most are not the 'big singers' from the Spring/Summer!! ;) :) Good syllable count -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you!