Comment from judiverse

Excellent

You did an excellent job with the format of chime operandi. You are not alone in this. Faith and prayer was your way of tearing down the wall. Your use of parallel structure is very appealing and helps the poem flow smoothly. judi

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019

Thank you for the review.

reply by judiverse on 30-Nov-2019

You're welcome. judi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very interesting and well written poem about the wall you built around yourself. You used very good words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I hope it is working well for you now my friend. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you Teri, for your nice review.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

This new form is growing in followers and each is so different and yet so very well done. Yours is excellent and such a message in the telling. Your strength is showing, my lady

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thanks for your nice review, Barb.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

I am so glad you got the help you needed before it was too late. You're a very strong woman has had a lot of obstacles in your life, but you always manage to get through it.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thanks for your nice review.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. I like this poem. Excellent work! It is a different kind of poem I have read. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

Thank you for your review.

reply by Raul1 on 26-Nov-2019

You're welcome.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I commend you for your courage in overcoming obstacles in your life, Patricia. Great job with this new form. You followed it well with good word choices. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Respectfully with Love, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for the courage to share your autobiographical poem in Dolly's new Chime operandi form. I admired your candor and your rhymes. Here's to continuing to live without a wall! Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I will have to do more research on Bi Polar. I don't think I know the correct symptoms despite having been diagnosed with it many years ago. Sadly, doctors are feel they HAVE to make a diagnosis and cannot admit they sometimes don't know the answer.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

Thanks for the review.

reply by Sasha on 26-Nov-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Exceptional

Yes, I've been there and that wall is so very hard to get through and it seems to return again from time to time especially at this time of year. Well written poem in a lovely form, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

I see Dolly's new form is catching on! Favorite lines: I could be free/and live with glee. Conclusion is neat, too! Very positive and encouraging. I guess the glass walls of the box in the photo are kind of like the invisible walls people build to keep from falling or getting hurt. Nice combo here.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

Thanks for the review.