Fat cat
He weighs a ton8 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned about the fat cat. You used very cute words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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This is a very cute and very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned about the fat cat. You used very cute words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Therese Caron
I love this poem. My sister had a big fat cat also named Libby. People always commented on the cat's girth, but my sister loved her so much she didn't care. She did not overfeed the cat, nor did she have a dog from whom the cat could steal food, the cat was just huge. Libby is gone now, but we all remember that loving fat cat that belonged to my sister. You've managed to portray a fat cat with just that handful of syllables. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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I love this poem. My sister had a big fat cat also named Libby. People always commented on the cat's girth, but my sister loved her so much she didn't care. She did not overfeed the cat, nor did she have a dog from whom the cat could steal food, the cat was just huge. Libby is gone now, but we all remember that loving fat cat that belonged to my sister. You've managed to portray a fat cat with just that handful of syllables. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for the review. Glad you liked it. Jen
Comment from Susan X Smith
That is a very good choice for a picture to complement this short piece. The poem is an excellent contest entry, since it fits the format and the rhyme gives it a nice punch.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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That is a very good choice for a picture to complement this short piece. The poem is an excellent contest entry, since it fits the format and the rhyme gives it a nice punch.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Many thanks Susan
Comment from oliver818
This is a simple poem but it is really quite funny and enjoyable to read. I enjoyed it. Everyone likes fat cats and I guess this is the unspoken message behind this poem. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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This is a simple poem but it is really quite funny and enjoyable to read. I enjoyed it. Everyone likes fat cats and I guess this is the unspoken message behind this poem. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent concise 1-6-1 poem
with three good rhymes and good connection of lines
The photo matches perfectly.
You're right, that is a big fat cat. :)
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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You've written an excellent concise 1-6-1 poem
with three good rhymes and good connection of lines
The photo matches perfectly.
You're right, that is a big fat cat. :)
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Many thanks Robert
Comment from amada
That must be a very fun fat cat to inspire this tricky poem in a short number of syllables. Yes, those cats are a great inspiration to write. Thank you for posting it.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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That must be a very fun fat cat to inspire this tricky poem in a short number of syllables. Yes, those cats are a great inspiration to write. Thank you for posting it.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Fat Cat, has the right set up and generally describes the titular subject of the tiny, eight-syllable ...........poem.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This 1-6-1, Fat Cat, has the right set up and generally describes the titular subject of the tiny, eight-syllable ...........poem.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
Your short verse describes the fat cat in the picture nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
Your short verse describes the fat cat in the picture nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thanks Sharon
