wintry storms of snow
5-7-5 contest entry38 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
That was a truly cute poem. You made me smile. Everybody deserves to find their utopia. I rather it be a warm day with ice cream. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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That was a truly cute poem. You made me smile. Everybody deserves to find their utopia. I rather it be a warm day with ice cream. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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I agree! Love Spring and Fall down here. Our Winters aren't extreme but a bit of a nuisance at times lol.
Thanks for the awesome reviews.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Willosa
What a cheeky looking snowman! laying there in his frigid utopia in a very provocative pose, I am very curious about his fantasies. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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What a cheeky looking snowman! laying there in his frigid utopia in a very provocative pose, I am very curious about his fantasies. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Lol! Thank you for the awesome review. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
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You?re welcome, your poem made me smile :-)
Comment from lauralumummu
A really cute poem in 5-7-5. I love the picture. A great entry for the contest. Utopia for a snowman but not for me we are having a snow storm warning now. All the best, Laura.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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A really cute poem in 5-7-5. I love the picture. A great entry for the contest. Utopia for a snowman but not for me we are having a snow storm warning now. All the best, Laura.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Right, not interested in snow here lol.Thanks for the awesome review.Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth flow having good alliteration as 'storms...snow ; forge frigid'.
Picture enhances depth of the poem.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth flow having good alliteration as 'storms...snow ; forge frigid'.
Picture enhances depth of the poem.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review, my friend. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
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Steve, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest. Winter and its frigid beauty is a wonderful source of scribing and its great expression in the imagery of this wonderful time of the year, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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This is an excellent entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest. Winter and its frigid beauty is a wonderful source of scribing and its great expression in the imagery of this wonderful time of the year, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Roy, for the great review. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
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Bless you Steve
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the imagery and the content. they are both awesome.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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this is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the imagery and the content. they are both awesome.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Rebekka, thank you greatly for this awesome six stars. I enjoyed this challenge. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an exciting poem to me, as snow always energizes me and it looks here as though the subjects of the poem are making the most of a good time. Good luck in the contest..
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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This is an exciting poem to me, as snow always energizes me and it looks here as though the subjects of the poem are making the most of a good time. Good luck in the contest..
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Katherine, for the awesome review. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
Comment from papa55mike
Wow! Using only nine words to make a 5-7-5. This poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great Thanksgiving, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Wow! Using only nine words to make a 5-7-5. This poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great Thanksgiving, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Much appreciated, Mike. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Debbie Pope
Brrrr. I am sitting over my heating vent, drinking hot coffee, and reading of frigid utopias. Such a utopia is for snowmen alright--not for me. There was a time though, not too long ago, when the thought of wintry storms of snow made my heart race. I always wanted to spend a winter locked up in a warm cabin in the words. It's such a romantic thought to me.
Your sweet poem with its nice alliterations made me think of all that. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Brrrr. I am sitting over my heating vent, drinking hot coffee, and reading of frigid utopias. Such a utopia is for snowmen alright--not for me. There was a time though, not too long ago, when the thought of wintry storms of snow made my heart race. I always wanted to spend a winter locked up in a warm cabin in the words. It's such a romantic thought to me.
Your sweet poem with its nice alliterations made me think of all that. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Oh, that does sound nice. You could spend a lot of time writing that way. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
Comment from JLR
Perfect in every sense of the definition. Each aspect of your poem is smooth, engaging and revels factual awareness
Thank you for sharing. Good succes
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Perfect in every sense of the definition. Each aspect of your poem is smooth, engaging and revels factual awareness
Thank you for sharing. Good succes
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you, JLR, for the stellar review. Sorry about the delay, Thanksgiving and all.
God bless
Steve
