Crystal forest
a 5 7 55 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your winter poem. It flows well with alliteration of d letters and sounds in your second sentence. I like the picture you painted with your words. Your poem tells me that you enjoy winter and nature. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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I enjoyed reading your winter poem. It flows well with alliteration of d letters and sounds in your second sentence. I like the picture you painted with your words. Your poem tells me that you enjoy winter and nature. Best wishes!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review angel. Yes, I do love winter and I anticipate getting some of that quality snow soon. It seems I just hung up my snow shoes a week ago, sigh, cheers
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Just the title draws the reader in. This beautiful title summons an animated image. Then the use of alliteration becomes onomatopoetic effecting the sound of the wind. I actually wrote a poem with the same image of diamonds. It was something about how rich we will be if we can gather all of these diamonds. Of course, they would melt and we'd find our greed got us nowhere. Yours is much more glorious. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Just the title draws the reader in. This beautiful title summons an animated image. Then the use of alliteration becomes onomatopoetic effecting the sound of the wind. I actually wrote a poem with the same image of diamonds. It was something about how rich we will be if we can gather all of these diamonds. Of course, they would melt and we'd find our greed got us nowhere. Yours is much more glorious. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the wonderful review and vote. I love those snowy, sunny days making the forest sparkle magically. I am looking forward to some quality snow very soon and leaving my snowshoe tracks everywhere. Cheers.
Comment from tammy novella
Beautifully said with the picture showing the same. I enjoyed your poem. I can imagine the wind carrying the snow draping and placing the diamond crystals onto the pine cone. Best to you.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Beautifully said with the picture showing the same. I enjoyed your poem. I can imagine the wind carrying the snow draping and placing the diamond crystals onto the pine cone. Best to you.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the review. I am waiting patiently for that first big snow storm. I live in the forest and love to meander in the snow on my snowshoes. Cheers.
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
This is a marvelous 5-7-5 winter poem. I just love the alliteration ("draping dazzling diamonds") which makes one, not just visualize, but feel the words, the bright and chilly words that introduce the best of winter times -- snow!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is a marvelous 5-7-5 winter poem. I just love the alliteration ("draping dazzling diamonds") which makes one, not just visualize, but feel the words, the bright and chilly words that introduce the best of winter times -- snow!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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I love that sparkling of new snow on the boughs. Seems like I just put up my snowshoes only a week ago haha. Thanks for the review, cheers.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Winter writing prompt.
Your verse tells of winter blizzards.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Winter writing prompt.
Your verse tells of winter blizzards.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the review Sharon. I love to meander around on my snow shoes after a big storm, though it seems only a week ago I put away my gear, sigh. Cheers.
