Flying Horses Farm
A Chime Operandi15 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
wow you made this look easy and it wasn't
I appreciate how well your words flow with your poem
I felt was believable and very well penned
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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wow you made this look easy and it wasn't
I appreciate how well your words flow with your poem
I felt was believable and very well penned
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
Comment from Gloria ....
Well that was fast, June and what a fun Chime Operandi you have written. I can see this all playing out and especially with the most appropriate artwork choice from CammyCards. She has some incredibly good artwork.
Just a little change in the rhyme pattern in your author notes, the e rhyme is a c rhyme and then down after that ending with a c.
Great job and a most enjoyable read. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Well that was fast, June and what a fun Chime Operandi you have written. I can see this all playing out and especially with the most appropriate artwork choice from CammyCards. She has some incredibly good artwork.
Just a little change in the rhyme pattern in your author notes, the e rhyme is a c rhyme and then down after that ending with a c.
Great job and a most enjoyable read. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Thanks for dropping by to read and offer your insights! I did correct the notes and changed the rhymes to c rhymes. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi June. This form is very new to me and seems to be a challenge. I hope to try it some day. I would mention that the tense for the word turn does not match. Turned might work. Just an observation.
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Hi June. This form is very new to me and seems to be a challenge. I hope to try it some day. I would mention that the tense for the word turn does not match. Turned might work. Just an observation.
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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I totally agree with your suggestion and have revised accordingly. Thanks for reading and offering your insights.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a fun verse with a good story.
I don't know; you say the Chime Operandi format is not difficult, but it looks plenty difficult to me.
Well done.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is a fun verse with a good story.
I don't know; you say the Chime Operandi format is not difficult, but it looks plenty difficult to me.
Well done.
Sharon
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
You've done very well with this Dolly invention June, I think you've done an excellent job, including the inner rhyme to boot, an excellent reproduction of her poem dear girl, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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You've done very well with this Dolly invention June, I think you've done an excellent job, including the inner rhyme to boot, an excellent reproduction of her poem dear girl, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it. Always nice to hear from youi!
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Good job
