Flying Horses Farm
A Chime Operandi15 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Yes, it certainly puts a smile on the reader's face, June, but what a rhythmic and well-written offering! ;) Read Dolly's the other day and have it in the stack of 'get to this when you've time', but, wow!, after her's and now yours, not sure my little dabbling will be able to add up to much... LOL! Seriously, though, I just love the feel of this one as it's both humorous and sophisticated -- great job!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) :) Yvette
Please forgive the tardiness (again!)...I'll probably catch up in time to fall behind again starting Wednesday (going to the in-laws - send the Calvary if I'm not back by Sunday!!)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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LOL!! Yes, it certainly puts a smile on the reader's face, June, but what a rhythmic and well-written offering! ;) Read Dolly's the other day and have it in the stack of 'get to this when you've time', but, wow!, after her's and now yours, not sure my little dabbling will be able to add up to much... LOL! Seriously, though, I just love the feel of this one as it's both humorous and sophisticated -- great job!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) :) Yvette
Please forgive the tardiness (again!)...I'll probably catch up in time to fall behind again starting Wednesday (going to the in-laws - send the Calvary if I'm not back by Sunday!!)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review! It was a fun format to try. Wasn't sure if the results made sense. But the feedback has been positive. Try it yourself sometime! And have a safe trip!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Those flying horses create a lasting memory that we never forget. The Merry Go Round was the ultimate as a little child and their features so attractive. One ride was never enough. I like that they will never be turned into glue. Your Chime Operandi is successful.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Those flying horses create a lasting memory that we never forget. The Merry Go Round was the ultimate as a little child and their features so attractive. One ride was never enough. I like that they will never be turned into glue. Your Chime Operandi is successful.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! June this is very cleverly written and I loved your poem and wish I had a six left for you! These horses are free to fly on the carousel forever unlike the real horses. A perfect Charm Operandi June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Wow! June this is very cleverly written and I loved your poem and wish I had a six left for you! These horses are free to fly on the carousel forever unlike the real horses. A perfect Charm Operandi June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I was hoping I could do this new format justice with a piece on forever flying horses. I appreciate your dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This chime operandi, Flying Horses Farm, uses the new format to bring those beautiful carousel horses to a place where they can run free and enjoy a free life.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This chime operandi, Flying Horses Farm, uses the new format to bring those beautiful carousel horses to a place where they can run free and enjoy a free life.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
Comment from Joan E.
What an eye-catching artwork and unusual form! I enjoyed your rhymes and reference to the "glue" factory at the conclusion. You made the Chime Operandi look easier than it is to create. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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What an eye-catching artwork and unusual form! I enjoyed your rhymes and reference to the "glue" factory at the conclusion. You made the Chime Operandi look easier than it is to create. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is a clever poem. You did very sell with the rhyming. I'll have to
try this Chime Operandi. Your poem and artwork are excellent. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is a clever poem. You did very sell with the rhyming. I'll have to
try this Chime Operandi. Your poem and artwork are excellent. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
Comment from country ranch writer
Round and round they go if only if they had a voice they could tell many a story of the ole days gone by and what has become of them now.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Round and round they go if only if they had a voice they could tell many a story of the ole days gone by and what has become of them now.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Chime Operandi poem about the flying horse farm where children of all ages can enjoy the magic of the carousel when real life takes a back seat for a while.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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A very well-written Chime Operandi poem about the flying horse farm where children of all ages can enjoy the magic of the carousel when real life takes a back seat for a while.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
Comment from Supe
This is an enjoyable read, very well presented and fun! I have not heard of this format but you made it look easy, though I don't think it is. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is an enjoyable read, very well presented and fun! I have not heard of this format but you made it look easy, though I don't think it is. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
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you are welcome.
Comment from Sallyo
This is wonderful! I have picked up yet another new form, and the picture you have complements the clever poem. (Or is it the poem complementing the picture?)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is wonderful! I have picked up yet another new form, and the picture you have complements the clever poem. (Or is it the poem complementing the picture?)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you for dropping to read and offer your insights! I really appreciate it.
