Two Steps
non-sense poem18 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
I'm impressed with how much you can say in eight syllables or seven words. It's a really beautiful picture you chose to go with your words, especially since the hearts look like they are falling on love. I hope the judges love your poem!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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I'm impressed with how much you can say in eight syllables or seven words. It's a really beautiful picture you chose to go with your words, especially since the hearts look like they are falling on love. I hope the judges love your poem!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Hi Susan thank you for reading and I hope too:) after all hope died last.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a good 242 poem. You have successfully used the correct syllable count. Very well written and your message is sweet. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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This is a good 242 poem. You have successfully used the correct syllable count. Very well written and your message is sweet. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind comments
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your few syllables (all the prompt allows) to convey a powerful message about falling in love. Resistance to love--for whatever reason--can be very strong.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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You have made effective use of your few syllables (all the prompt allows) to convey a powerful message about falling in love. Resistance to love--for whatever reason--can be very strong.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Bill Pinder
Good job with this creative form of writing with the message of taking the bold chance of falling in love. Hopefully it's genuine on both sides, because it is a long way down to the bottom.
Bill
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Good job with this creative form of writing with the message of taking the bold chance of falling in love. Hopefully it's genuine on both sides, because it is a long way down to the bottom.
Bill
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments
Comment from Kathleen S.
Your poetry is well written, but also reminds me of two step puzzles that you might solve on "The Wheel of Fortune" game on tv. Which is sort of interesting when you think of it. :) I love the artwork that goes with it.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Your poetry is well written, but also reminds me of two step puzzles that you might solve on "The Wheel of Fortune" game on tv. Which is sort of interesting when you think of it. :) I love the artwork that goes with it.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Iza, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 2-4-2 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Hello Iza, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 2-4-2 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for finding the perfect picture to parallel your advice in this 2-4-2 poem. I liked the wordplay with "two steps" as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you for finding the perfect picture to parallel your advice in this 2-4-2 poem. I liked the wordplay with "two steps" as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Sally Law
Amen. Two steps forward into the arms of the one you love. This is a wonderful theme and entry for the 2-4-2 poetry contest, Iza.
Sending you my best today as always, and for the contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Amen. Two steps forward into the arms of the one you love. This is a wonderful theme and entry for the 2-4-2 poetry contest, Iza.
Sending you my best today as always, and for the contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review Sally.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest.
Your short verse tells of falling in love in 2 steps.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest.
Your short verse tells of falling in love in 2 steps.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Sharon
Comment from Therese Caron
Short, sweet, and to the point. I find the short poems the most difficult to write, whether it's lines, words, or syllables. You have done a great job, and your picture provides a lovely background.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Short, sweet, and to the point. I find the short poems the most difficult to write, whether it's lines, words, or syllables. You have done a great job, and your picture provides a lovely background.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words Therese
