Cherished
Who knows what's just round the corner?8 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your love poem is beautifully written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with a heart felt message of love. It rhymes well and I love your artwork choice. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
Your love poem is beautifully written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with a heart felt message of love. It rhymes well and I love your artwork choice. Best wishes!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
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Many thanks for the great review and stars. Much appreciated.
Comment from Eleanor Frances (Elf)
I love this poem! I'm certain that many people can relate to it. The photo you chose works very well. It's not easy to write a love poem with so many "love" words prohibited. Very poignant! I could feel the pain and the joy.
Good luck in the contest!
Elf
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
I love this poem! I'm certain that many people can relate to it. The photo you chose works very well. It's not easy to write a love poem with so many "love" words prohibited. Very poignant! I could feel the pain and the joy.
Good luck in the contest!
Elf
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for the review and the stars.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When someone walks into our life and fills us with joy, it can make a huge difference to us and give us a positive future, I enjoyed your sweet romantic words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
When someone walks into our life and fills us with joy, it can make a huge difference to us and give us a positive future, I enjoyed your sweet romantic words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem contest.
This verse describes being lost until your special love one is found.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem contest.
This verse describes being lost until your special love one is found.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much Sharon
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
The heart of the matter.
In my evaluation and comment, the poem is one I can identify with.
The picture is superb. In this day of cheapness in the media and the arts, this romantic contest entry is a plus.
Don
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
The heart of the matter.
In my evaluation and comment, the poem is one I can identify with.
The picture is superb. In this day of cheapness in the media and the arts, this romantic contest entry is a plus.
Don
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much Don for the great review and the super six.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I hope this is biographical.i hope you are filled with the contentment and happiness that exudes from your words. You describe true love. It's a life changer. And, it brings contentment to empty lives.
Thanks for sharing your perceptive thoughts.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
I hope this is biographical.i hope you are filled with the contentment and happiness that exudes from your words. You describe true love. It's a life changer. And, it brings contentment to empty lives.
Thanks for sharing your perceptive thoughts.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thanks Debbie
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer, a terrific Thursday to you. I enjoyed your poem, it had a nice flow to it and the rhymes were good. I think you did a great job on the writing prompt. To write a love poem and not use those words is quite difficult. Good job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
Hello fellow writer, a terrific Thursday to you. I enjoyed your poem, it had a nice flow to it and the rhymes were good. I think you did a great job on the writing prompt. To write a love poem and not use those words is quite difficult. Good job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Bunglie
I am amazed how easily this poem flows, extolling the love that you feel for your partner without actually saying you love her. It is clear to all that you feel she is your salvation. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
I am amazed how easily this poem flows, extolling the love that you feel for your partner without actually saying you love her. It is clear to all that you feel she is your salvation. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Many thanks. Much appreciated.