Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, this is so six-worthy.... here is my virtual, mystery poet!! :) Your melodic weaving of truths and the perfect attitude make for wonderful offering for this contest.... haven't seen the others, but this one will take a masterpiece to beat - GREAT job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls - you've got my vote! ;)

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thank you so much. I appreciate that.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a very clever interpretation of the elderlyitis prompt. It resonated with me because I am thoroughly enjoying my retirement years. I also liked your use of rhyme throughout the poem.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thank you.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Elderlyitis contest.
This verse tells of someone enjoying their elder years.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thank you.