The Fruits of Romance
5-7-5 Romance Contest Entry18 total reviews
Comment from DragonSkulls
Excellent. One of the few in the contest that actually has something to do with romance. Perfect few words to express passion with the perfect picture to accompany it. I'm sure this will be a top contender. Fantastic work, author. Best of luck in the booth. I'll keep an eye out for it.
DS
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Excellent. One of the few in the contest that actually has something to do with romance. Perfect few words to express passion with the perfect picture to accompany it. I'm sure this will be a top contender. Fantastic work, author. Best of luck in the booth. I'll keep an eye out for it.
DS
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Mr. Skulls! Killer review. I appreciate these great comments and all those stars. I agree, this is the perfect picture to go with this. Romance can be anything from a presented rose to your spine turning to jelly under a loved one's touch. Obviously, I choose the latter. LOL Thank you!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Liked your total presentation for your romance entry: color choices, text, and artwork.
Your fruit flavors can almost be tasted/sensed.
Thanks for all.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Liked your total presentation for your romance entry: color choices, text, and artwork.
Your fruit flavors can almost be tasted/sensed.
Thanks for all.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much, Mark. This is a great review and I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Lovely comments! I appreciate your time and love all these stars. Thank you!!!
Comment from Kristin Porter
Cleverly written. I find the want and need in this piece. She's drawing him near with sweet scents, swirling around her, tantalizing him, like a woman knows to do.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Cleverly written. I find the want and need in this piece. She's drawing him near with sweet scents, swirling around her, tantalizing him, like a woman knows to do.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Spot on, Kristin!! lol Thank you so much for this great review and all those stars. You totally get it. Your comments are lovely and so much appreciated. Thank you!
Comment from RodG
One can easily see how the Speaker here is easily aroused by red lipstick and a fruity perfume. I like your use of alliteration in line two. Excellent choice of photo, too. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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One can easily see how the Speaker here is easily aroused by red lipstick and a fruity perfume. I like your use of alliteration in line two. Excellent choice of photo, too. Rod
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Rod!! Very cool review. This, to me, is romance. You walk that fine line and dig into the purring factor. I appreciate these lovely comments and thank you so much for this!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a well done 5-7-5 poem. From the title, to the photo, to your powerful word selection, this is perfection. To me, it's what these short poems are all about. Your use of the word nectars, and your choice of fruits is intelligent writing. Surely you have won this contest.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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What a well done 5-7-5 poem. From the title, to the photo, to your powerful word selection, this is perfection. To me, it's what these short poems are all about. Your use of the word nectars, and your choice of fruits is intelligent writing. Surely you have won this contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Oh, Debbie, this is such a beautiful review and I can't thank you enough. Everybody has their own version of romance but to get the job done with only 17 syllables is tricky at best. Your lovely comments let me know I came close. Thank you!!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This short poem certainly fits the category, and it should be a fruitful contest entry. I like the use of cherry, peach and nectars, which adds interest. Good job.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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This short poem certainly fits the category, and it should be a fruitful contest entry. I like the use of cherry, peach and nectars, which adds interest. Good job.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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...fruitful contest entry... lol! Thank you so much, Susan, for this great review. Your comments are lovely and I so appreciate them. Have a great week!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and poem are very good.
-The imagery and use of
color and fragrance creates
a very good word picture.
-Effective use of alliteration,
and a good concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and poem are very good.
-The imagery and use of
color and fragrance creates
a very good word picture.
-Effective use of alliteration,
and a good concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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What a great review, Pam! Your comments are lovely and I appreciate them very much. Thank you!
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You are very welcome. It was a peach of a poem:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 romance poem connecting a sweet love with senses of smell of the sweet scent of peach perfume and taste of sweet cherry's on her lips, the nectar of passion.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 romance poem connecting a sweet love with senses of smell of the sweet scent of peach perfume and taste of sweet cherry's on her lips, the nectar of passion.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Sandra! I'm glad you liked this. I appreciate your time in reading and rating this. Lovely review! Thank you.
