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The Fruits of Romance

5-7-5 Romance Contest Entry

18 total reviews 
Comment from Barbaraj1
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I see you won the contest. Good job! This is a great 5-7-5 poem and it
is very romantic. It's very clever rather than the usual I love you poems.
What great artwork you chose.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thank you ever so much, Barbara! This was so much fun to do and I'm glad you liked it. Your lovely comments are much appreciated. Lynda
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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Oh yeah! Sista doing good on this one! Erotically sensual! Lovin' it! You are such a creative poet!

Thank you for sharing your beauty with words!

xoxo

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    Thank you, D! This was so much fun to write. Glad you liked it! Lynda
reply by Diana L Crawford on 22-Nov-2019
    Yummy as always!! :) xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The sweet peach and cherry painted a passionate picture here and your words brought the scented smells of perfume to complete the picture, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Dolly. I'm glad you liked this. Your time, review and stars a much appreciated! Lynda
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is very well executed and speaks to romance eloquently in a few well chosen words. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    These are beautiful comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this contest entry. Thank you so much!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I believe that you've captured the subject matter beautifully with your well placed and descriptive wording. The artwork is spot on and compliments your work well. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Jeff! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for taking the time to read and review this. Lovely comments. Much appreciated. Thanks!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Romance contest.
Using sweet fruits to describe your romance is clever.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Sharon. This is a lovely review with such kind words. It was fun to do. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Your comments are much appreciated!
Comment from Bunglie
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I love your simplicity using the simile of fruit. I flows rhythmically from one line to another and leaves me licking my lips. Thank You, I now need a drink!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    ...I now need a drink.. HAHA!! Thank you so much for this great review! Much appreciated. Loved these comments! Thank you!
Comment from jenintorre
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A very fruity write in more ways than one. I enjoyed reading this 5-7-5 romance competition entry and wish you lots of luck in the contest. Cheers. Jen

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Lovely review, Jen. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this contest entry. Great comments. Thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
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Woohoo - that is sexy; it makes me feel like nuzzling her neck myself, then jumping the guy who actually is, hehe. Love that photo. Oh... is there a poem?? haha. It's so good, it's got winner written all over it.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Is there a poem? HAHAHA!! What a great review. Thank you sooooo much! Killer comments and wow, look at all those stars. Much appreciated!
reply by LisaMay on 21-Nov-2019
    Blinded by delight of the stars, eh?
    Happy to have your poem zooming high.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you dear! I love that pic too.
reply by LisaMay on 21-Nov-2019
    Picture? What picture? It is the poem that lingers in my mind!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    LMAO!!! Miss you.
reply by LisaMay on 21-Nov-2019
    I hope you are having a wonderful life!! (?)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    switching to messages
Comment from mrsmajor
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Picture and words, make for a perfect package...syllable count as required, and a joy to read,..Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest, this was a pleasure reading...

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much, Victoria! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review this. Lovely comments. Thank you!
reply by mrsmajor on 21-Nov-2019
    You're very welcome, it was my pleasure..