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aren't we all blind?

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Are we blind to what we see? When I look at your image I notice naked bodies and a man that's in between two bodies. There are different races/faces within the picture which holds a colorful status to one's mind.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you, dear.
Comment from mrsmajor
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Thoughtful, honest, and there's a lot of truth in your comments...sight is only one sense we are Blessed with, touch, the sound of pleasure, is also what God has given us...If truth be told, all of our sense, come into play, just as God intended...Thanks for sharing this with us...it was well written, in your own way,

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    In my own way...lol. Yes, my dear, I guess I kinda do write in my own way, eh? Thank you. Doug
reply by mrsmajor on 21-Nov-2019

    You're very welcome, Doug...yes in you're own "Special" way...lol

    Hugs!
Comment from Sherry Asbury2
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This very introspective write is slow and easy on the brain. A lovely symphony of emotions and thoughts. This is a slow dance where what is not seen is felt in a multitude of sensory input. very nicely done, Poet.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    I thank you for resonating. Doug
Comment from Eleanor Frances (Elf)
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This is a very expressive poem. I really like how subtle you are when articulating the subject. The artwork and colors you chose work well. Very nice!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you. I love ur profile. Would that we all could create the life we always dreamed of.
Comment from Eve Vasa
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Hello, this is very enigmatic, a lovely free verse and your idea about a blind person being on the same plane as you in love, is interesting. I hope you've entered this into the free verse competition. It is a poem worth sharing and have a great day wherever that may be, cheers, Eve.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Eve. I am glad you liked it. Doug
Comment from Mia Twysted
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Interesting picture you have chosen to go with your poem. This piece itself was too interesting. Sex with a blind woman leads you to feel more and see less while in the act.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Correct. My point exactly. Thank you.
Comment from Hitcher
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Being blindfolded could be the answer and solution to sharing your extremely sensual and emotionally charged sexual experience my good man ; )) Very nicely put together Vic


 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
    Thank you, Hitch. Happy Holidays. Doug
Comment from nomi338
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Most men myself included, make love at some point with our eyes closed as we visualize whatever stimulating fantasy that gets our motors humming and running at top speed. Great write that led to a great read.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
    Thank you, my friend. Doug
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is beautifully penned and a truly compelling topic. I know from personal experiences with those we tend to consider handicapped, that the loss of one sense serves to heighten the others dramatically. They say God never closes a door without opening a window and this is an example of how true that saying really is. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much, for this is exactly what I was trying to convey. Doug
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
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I really love your writing Vic, it is soothing and you always use great imagery. I love the sentiment here as well. This is a very nice concept and gives us a different perspective on how we think. Very real and noteworthy. I like the artwork you chose too. Great job!


Michael

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
    Thank you, Michael. Doug