Reciprocity
A flower can brighten your day.16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These sort of impromptu acts can give both the receiver and the giver a well earned boost in life and flowers always touch our hearts, these innocent blooms please us, I enjoyed your gift of words to us here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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These sort of impromptu acts can give both the receiver and the giver a well earned boost in life and flowers always touch our hearts, these innocent blooms please us, I enjoyed your gift of words to us here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much Dolly xo. ^-^
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, this is the first time I have had a chance to review this particular poetic discipline. You have done a masterful job of filling the requirements and at the same time utilized such a wonderful theme.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Dear Author, this is the first time I have had a chance to review this particular poetic discipline. You have done a masterful job of filling the requirements and at the same time utilized such a wonderful theme.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks very much, Suzanna.
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You are most welcome! Keep writing!
Comment from Ogden
The point of your poem is admirable, but its wording actually doesn't express it. (You might consider a change like, 'Gifts you give that you'd appreciate receiving,' etc., etc.
I hope this helps.
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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The point of your poem is admirable, but its wording actually doesn't express it. (You might consider a change like, 'Gifts you give that you'd appreciate receiving,' etc., etc.
I hope this helps.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your thoughtful review as this has a specific syllable count it is not easy to work with your words though.
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You're welcome, but my suggestion was meant as an example for a needed new approach. Keep trying, Laura.
Don
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I looked at it and with my explanation at the bottom I like it this way, thanks anyways.
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Well, I tried to help. Fortunately, you won't find out the result of your decision, because there won't be any voters, and the committee judges won't comment, either.
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Don
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I have had excellent reviews and comments and I choose poetic licence and I know you mean well. I like it I would change it if I didn't.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a great entry. And I have truly learned that when you give, it comes back to you, sometimes tenfold. When I do not have fresh flowers on my table, I yearn for them.
And flowers aside, this poem is about giving. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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This is a great entry. And I have truly learned that when you give, it comes back to you, sometimes tenfold. When I do not have fresh flowers on my table, I yearn for them.
And flowers aside, this poem is about giving. Beautiful.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you Therese, you understand how I feel. I appreciate you and your review.
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have heard of Serendipity. Nice. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have heard of Serendipity. Nice. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank s very much, Raul.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise (as required by the prompt) poem conveys a powerful message about the blessing of GIVING, which often makes us feel better deep down than receiving does.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Your ultra-concise (as required by the prompt) poem conveys a powerful message about the blessing of GIVING, which often makes us feel better deep down than receiving does.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thank Janice, for the review and stars.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Surprise gifts are always the BEST kind, bar none!! ;) :) This is a lovely offering the contest, Laura, especially since it was inspired and not just 'written'... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Surprise gifts are always the BEST kind, bar none!! ;) :) This is a lovely offering the contest, Laura, especially since it was inspired and not just 'written'... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 26-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
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Thanks Yvette, Your thoughtful reviews are always something to look forward too.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
As you know how it feels to receive flowers from someone, wonderful, right? That's why it is so good to send someone flowers. You have got it quite right and that plant in your picture is beautiful.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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As you know how it feels to receive flowers from someone, wonderful, right? That's why it is so good to send someone flowers. You have got it quite right and that plant in your picture is beautiful.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your review and stars
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four line poem about the gift of giving always returns to the one who are willing to give and make another happy and brighten their lives with flowers.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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A very well-written four line poem about the gift of giving always returns to the one who are willing to give and make another happy and brighten their lives with flowers.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful feedback and stars.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a structurally sound Four Line Poem. The content is timely and the message so important as it is often the simplest things given in love which are truly the mot treasured gifts. Good luck in the judging ad thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a structurally sound Four Line Poem. The content is timely and the message so important as it is often the simplest things given in love which are truly the mot treasured gifts. Good luck in the judging ad thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much!
