Missing
2-4-2 Poetry16 total reviews
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a particularly poignant 2-4-2 poem. The initial "Missing" and the culminating "wishing" provide the perfect bookends for "looking for her" {thumbs up}.
The image you've selected to accompany your post adds to the presentation of the poem {smiles}.
I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is a particularly poignant 2-4-2 poem. The initial "Missing" and the culminating "wishing" provide the perfect bookends for "looking for her" {thumbs up}.
The image you've selected to accompany your post adds to the presentation of the poem {smiles}.
I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think you among the many here Raul when wishing for this beauty! Ha ha ha, you made me smile, fine not so innocent words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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I think you among the many here Raul when wishing for this beauty! Ha ha ha, you made me smile, fine not so innocent words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Interest poem for the contest. The image is interesting and background nice. I am not sure what to make of a woman cowgirl. You met the requirements of the contest. Thank you for sharing. Good luck with the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Interest poem for the contest. The image is interesting and background nice. I am not sure what to make of a woman cowgirl. You met the requirements of the contest. Thank you for sharing. Good luck with the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Comment from Joan E.
I can see why you are "looking for her"--she is a beauty! You conveyed the longing in this very short poem and added an eye-catching, reinforcing picture. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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I can see why you are "looking for her"--she is a beauty! You conveyed the longing in this very short poem and added an eye-catching, reinforcing picture. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Louise Michelle
I don't know if this particular gal is based on a real news story, but the first thing that came to my mind is murder and abduction. On the other hand, it could just be about unrequited love. I hope it's the latter. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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I don't know if this particular gal is based on a real news story, but the first thing that came to my mind is murder and abduction. On the other hand, it could just be about unrequited love. I hope it's the latter. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest.
Nicely rhymed and a story is told in your short verse.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest.
Nicely rhymed and a story is told in your short verse.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from forestport12
The picture fits, because you get they impression she's about to hit the trail. The words are intriguing to say the least. I always love how you can take a few words and make them say or lead to so much.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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The picture fits, because you get they impression she's about to hit the trail. The words are intriguing to say the least. I always love how you can take a few words and make them say or lead to so much.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Wishing you can find her again as she had moved on leaving you behind in the process. Cowboys and cow girls never stay in one place at a time.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Wishing you can find her again as she had moved on leaving you behind in the process. Cowboys and cow girls never stay in one place at a time.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about wishful thinking about a girl that is missing in your life, but anyone can make their dreams alive it will harm no one else.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about wishful thinking about a girl that is missing in your life, but anyone can make their dreams alive it will harm no one else.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Either a poem of lost love or of someone looking for love, but just can't find it. Sad either way. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Either a poem of lost love or of someone looking for love, but just can't find it. Sad either way. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thanks, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
