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Delightful Inanity

Sometimes, the mind just wanders...

54 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fantasy write that takes me into the world of dreams and your presentation is beautiful and pleasing Yvette, I'm loving the colours and of course your fine words took me to another place, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Oh, I'm so very glad your enjoyed my bit of 'nerdy nuttiness', Dolly! :) It has been a crazy week round here -- and your words certainly bring a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Nonet about the digital world we are captured in and to get through each stage of waiting until we find relief in our dreams.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Oh, I'm so very glad your enjoyed my bit of 'nerdy nuttiness', Sandra! :) It has been a crazy week round here -- and your words certainly bring a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette

Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Nonet Poetry contest.
Your colorful, fantasy verse is lovely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Oh, I'm so very glad your enjoyed my bit of 'nerdy nuttiness', Sharon! :) It has been a crazy week round here -- and your words certainly bring a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette

Comment from damommy
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A lot of the time, our best work is done when we just go with the flow. The picture enhances the fantasy feel of your well chosen words. You did a great job rhyming, too.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Oh, I'm so very glad your enjoyed my bit of 'nerdy nuttiness', Yvonne! :) It has been a crazy week round here -- and your words certainly bring a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
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The fantastical artwork parallels your Nonet well. I enjoyed your taking us through "life's tangible maze" and your rhymes and your use of the "key" metaphor, plus your rhymes. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed my bit of 'nerdy nuttiness', Joan! :) It has been a crazy week round here -- and your words certainly bring a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
reply by Joan E. on 17-Nov-2019
    Best wishes with your struggle to overcome tiredness and have a more serene, new week. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Yvette, a very well written nonet, true to form. It starts off with four very technical lines followed by very poet words in the last five lines. A nice mix as is your display - very colourful. Together with a lovely picture - a rather more up to date version of a Pre-Raphaelite kind of picture. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed my bit of 'nerdy nuttiness', Dorothy! :) It has been a crazy week round here -- and your words certainly bring a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from rjuselius
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wow. this is a beautifully crafted piece of Yvette! i love the rhyme, the rhythm and the content. bravo my friend!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Wow, Rebekka -- so very glad you enjoyed my 'nerdy nuttiness'! :) Those stars and your wonderful review are such a welcome ray of sunshine! :) It has been a crazy week round here (see below) -- thanx much for your review as it certainly brings a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care out there and thanx again! ;) Yvette
    My apologies for running behind this week -- one of our science teachers had to take a leave of absence to care for her mom and I crazily volunteered to review/mark-up the physics & chemistry science project papers for her and meet with students as necessary....what was I thinking??! lol! I am now fully reminded why I ONLY teach mathematics -- I hardly have to think with pure numbers!! :) :)
reply by rjuselius on 18-Nov-2019
    this was entirely my pleasure dear yvette! i thoroughly enjoy your poems as they have depth. you are a beautiful writer! hugs, xxx
Comment from Earl Corp
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Sometimes the best things we write are when we just get after it without a lot of thought. This was a fun look into your psyche. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    LOL! Oooohhh, but you don't want to venture too far in there, Sir -- scary stuff, I'm tellin' ya!! ;) :) Thanx so much for your review and good luck wishes, Earl -- always good to hear from you! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Barbaraj1
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This is an excellent Nonet poem. Your images are vivid. The poem flows
well. Your syllable count is correct. I love the artwork. You did a great
job.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    So very glad you enjoyed my 'nerdy nuttiness', BarbaraJ! :) It has been a crazy week round here -- thanx much for your review !! ;) :) Take care this week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Yvette, I enjoyed reading this very creative poem that seems to indicate a very busy mind. Good luck managing all the data and keeping it in sync. Have a great weekend!
Bill

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    LOL!! ;) So very glad you enjoyed my 'nerdy nuttiness', Bill! :) It has been a crazy week round here and it's good to hear from you -- thanx much for your review as it certainly brings a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette