Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is an imaginative poem using computer/tech terms to describe getting into a dreamworld or to link to your imaginaton.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed this one, Joan -- twas a day of 'bleeding stress overload through the poet's pen!! ;) LOL! Hope you have a Happy rest of the week whether that includes Thanksgiving Celebrations or simply celebrating thanx!! Take care! Yvette

Comment from Wils

Excellent

I will admit it took me a few read throughs to get it (I'm strange, I'll admit it) but now I can't get enough. A beautiful rhyming flow to thor piece. If only the sparkling key was so easy to find.
Geoff

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019

LOL! You're no more strange than the author is, Geoff -- it was definitely the end of a long day in a crazy week that this one was composed... glad you enjoyed, sir!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

Congrats on placing in the contest Yvette : )) A Beautifully presented, extremely well crafted Nonet with a stunning picture to accompany it.
Explore cognition's uplink
to life's tangible maze. (Definitely a journey worth taking : ))

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019

Good morning, Hitch, and thanx so much for the CONGRATS, sir -- I see your name made it up there too, so good on ya, sir!! ;) :) You take care of you and Moana and hope y'all's holiday preparation are about to get underway.... at least y'all don't have 'Thanxgiving' gathering to deal with next week - LOL!! ;) :) Take care and thanx for the review! ;) Yvette

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Excellent

Haha! It's fantastic! Love the attitude and your color scheme and picture are gorgeous!! Funny how things just fall out our pencils sometimes!

xoxo

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

LOL!! So glad you enjoyed my descent into nuttiness, my lady!! ;) :) It was a fun way to just 'decompress' this past week: let the pen and mind wander while reigning in their syllables... :) :) Thanx for stopping in on this one, Diana -- have a great evening! ;) Yvette

reply by Diana L Crawford on 18-Nov-2019

:). xoxo!!

Comment from PLAIN1

Excellent

Go ahead then, journey me through the cognitive senses of a soul that dances. Thank you for sparkling. Love the colors. You started me off with a creaminess of that green and took it to a stoutly amazing shade of purple.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed this blonde's descent into 'nuttiness' on this one, P1 -- crazy weeks lead to crazy writes, don't cha know?! ;) :) Just put the pencil to paper and this is what you get...lol! ;) Thanx for the review and for stopping by! ;) Yvette

Comment from evesayshi

Exceptional

In my opinion, do I sense an apologetic comment from this exceptional writer? If so, I am indeed confused, as I read a beautiful submission, in both easy rhyming verse and imagery. This is an outstanding write in its entirety, thus the Six Stars - thank you for sharing...

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

Wow, Eve -- thank you so very much for such a wonderful review and those bright and shiny stars, my lady!! ;) I am so very glad you enjoyed the blonde's decent into nuttiness (lol!) as it was a very crazy last week and this was at the close of a long day ... I was feeling 'creative' and voila!! You've got 'nutty'! :) Take care over there on the coast -- Yvette :)

reply by evesayshi on 19-Nov-2019

You are very welcome, Yvette, and we all should be so creatively 'nutty' - in fact, I strive to do so...Eve

Comment from Abecedarius Rucker

Excellent

Wow, this poem is beautiful! Not only are the words powerful, but the way you've written it and decorated it (for lack of a better word) is quite aesthetically pleasing! -AR

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

Thanx so much for your review on my 'flight of fantasy', AR! ;) ;) So good of you to drop by for tea this day -- we shall look forward to seeing your attendance in the future!! ;) :) Yvette

Comment from Alchera

Exceptional

I think I have found the sparkling key of your soul's dreams, my dearest teacher, within the tangible maze uplinking the explored cognition of numerial haze and digital sync. Your professional verbage overflows this perfectly written unusual no net structure and storylined moonlight beamed content all wrapped within your selected picture of splendor. Great unthinkable work. Blessings from Italy

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

LOL! ;) I'm so very glad you enjoyed my blonde decent into nuttiness, sir!! ;) Was a crazy week and this was written at the end of a long day... sometimes ya just gotta go with what comes out of the pen!! ;) :) And 'unthinkable'? Oh, I do consider that a challenge, Sir Tony!! ;) :) LOL! Take care over there and thank you for these lovely stars!! :) Yvette

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a great poem with metaphors of the computer age. The colors and pictures highlight the message. You stick to the Nonet form without any artificial cuts or squeezing. Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

LOL! :) So glad you enjoyed my decent into a bit of nuttiness, Susan -- it was fun and I thank you for your review!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

I like this a lot, Yvette. It's a bit mystical and presented so well. It looks like a dreamland with romantic fantasies. I think you should do well in the Nonet contest! :-)

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

LOL! :) So glad you enjoyed my decent into a bit of nuttiness, Janet -- it was fun and I thank you for your review!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette