Impeachment...Shame
What our country needs is God and healing more government67 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
I've seen a little about that on TV. It's sad. My guess is that he will not be impeached, but will lose the election in 2020. Hopefully things will get better after that. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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I've seen a little about that on TV. It's sad. My guess is that he will not be impeached, but will lose the election in 2020. Hopefully things will get better after that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
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Cindy, regardless of the outcome, our politicians must, for the good of the future generations, must stop the in-fighting and focus on Americans and our country's terrible conditions.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise, understandably emotional poem conveys a powerful
message that will resonate with many, I'm sure. I think of how different
my grandchildren's world is than mine was--scarier. So many sinful ways are being shoved down their throats, and there is so much chaos in the world.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Your ultra-concise, understandably emotional poem conveys a powerful
message that will resonate with many, I'm sure. I think of how different
my grandchildren's world is than mine was--scarier. So many sinful ways are being shoved down their throats, and there is so much chaos in the world.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the validation! Yes, we must pray our politicians will wake up to the fact that we need to come together and heal this country.
Comment from Earl Corp
They say the fall of the Roman Empire was brought about by drinking wine from lead goblets, we don't have lead to blame it on. The problem is politicians confuse themselves with leaders. Good luck in the contest.
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They say the fall of the Roman Empire was brought about by drinking wine from lead goblets, we don't have lead to blame it on. The problem is politicians confuse themselves with leaders. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
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Earl, a sad legacy and even more profoundly, history, once again repeating itself.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking verse, though relevant in concern, offers nothing regarding resolution. Unfortunately, too many share this dark view of our future, absent constructive redress...
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In my opinion, a striking verse, though relevant in concern, offers nothing regarding resolution. Unfortunately, too many share this dark view of our future, absent constructive redress...
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Correct...
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I am glad you agree - apparently kindred thinking...Eve
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great awareness of our need for God in our nation. We are for the people,
not for the bullies with big bucks and lawyers. Mob boss style is not good for the youth to see. Now, with another gun shooting the leaders should help the people with a solution to make our schools safer. We need to pray. Good awareness message. Stars for you. flylikeaneagle
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Great awareness of our need for God in our nation. We are for the people,
not for the bullies with big bucks and lawyers. Mob boss style is not good for the youth to see. Now, with another gun shooting the leaders should help the people with a solution to make our schools safer. We need to pray. Good awareness message. Stars for you. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
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Your six stars is so humbling! We do need prayer and with that action to change.
Comment from 24chas
I'm afraid you are correct in your words of this poem. And I personally don't see much hope for the future with the current crop of people leading all the parties. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
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I'm afraid you are correct in your words of this poem. And I personally don't see much hope for the future with the current crop of people leading all the parties. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Mastery
Excellent writing, author. You have accomplished so much in such few total words here. I turn 80 tomorrow and like you...fear for my kids and their kids for our country and the world too due to climate change. Could things look any worse? Bob
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Excellent writing, author. You have accomplished so much in such few total words here. I turn 80 tomorrow and like you...fear for my kids and their kids for our country and the world too due to climate change. Could things look any worse? Bob
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
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Bob, thank you And my dear friend HAPPY EIGHTIETH!
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Thank you! :) Bob
Comment from Brian Hill
I could not agree more with the words you have written. We have lost all respect in the leadership of our great nation. Great poem with a great message. Good luck
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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I could not agree more with the words you have written. We have lost all respect in the leadership of our great nation. Great poem with a great message. Good luck
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Brian, thanks for the validation.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Short Poem contest.
It's not easy to tell a story in such a short verse but you've done it. Your short verse is well rhymed as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Short Poem contest.
It's not easy to tell a story in such a short verse but you've done it. Your short verse is well rhymed as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
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Sharon, thank you.
Comment from sunnilicious
Faith and prayers can bring miracles. You're poem was depressing, however, well thought out and creatively written. I liked the repeat of dimmer and ending being slimmer. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest :)
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Faith and prayers can bring miracles. You're poem was depressing, however, well thought out and creatively written. I liked the repeat of dimmer and ending being slimmer. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
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We live in depressing times....but I too hold out hope and have faith miracles will still come about.
