Never Forsaken
An acrostic poem43 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
This is a beautiful acrostic poem, expressing so clearly in free verse the delights to be found in spiritual relationship with Christ. I especially love the title and basis for the acrostic. What a comfort it is to know we are never forsaken. I also loved the illustration. Such a pleasure to read this poem first thing this morning. I hope this does well in the contest. It should.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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This is a beautiful acrostic poem, expressing so clearly in free verse the delights to be found in spiritual relationship with Christ. I especially love the title and basis for the acrostic. What a comfort it is to know we are never forsaken. I also loved the illustration. Such a pleasure to read this poem first thing this morning. I hope this does well in the contest. It should.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated and so good to see you today. Sending my best as always, Sally xo
Comment from JudyE
You've achieved a very natural but rhythmic pattern with your acrostic poem. It reads very naturally and is a very worthy entry for the competition. Wishing you all the best with it.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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You've achieved a very natural but rhythmic pattern with your acrostic poem. It reads very naturally and is a very worthy entry for the competition. Wishing you all the best with it.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. It is always so appreciated.
Sending my best today as always, Sally ox
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Lady Sal! Such a beautiful offering of a graceful testament of personal faith -- your words and presentation are not only uplifting but they are warm and inviting which is just perfect for a testimony!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck,my lady, in the contest! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Oh, Lady Sal! Such a beautiful offering of a graceful testament of personal faith -- your words and presentation are not only uplifting but they are warm and inviting which is just perfect for a testimony!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck,my lady, in the contest! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and kindest compliments, dear Yvette. It's. I'd to have a forum where I can express my faith. :)
Sending you my best today as always
Sally xo
