Never Forsaken
An acrostic poem43 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
*...sigh...* This lovely verse is exactly what I needed at the moment. The world around us, as beautiful a creation as it is, can also be intrusive,stressful, and your acrostic poem is so serene, I really am finding myself winding down (and re-focusing). Just beautiful! Thank you for sharing, and here's wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
*...sigh...* This lovely verse is exactly what I needed at the moment. The world around us, as beautiful a creation as it is, can also be intrusive,stressful, and your acrostic poem is so serene, I really am finding myself winding down (and re-focusing). Just beautiful! Thank you for sharing, and here's wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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This review blessed my heart, dear Dawn. It's nice to know that God used my writing to bring blessings and encouragement to you. It means so much that you stopped in your busy day to say so. Thank you. Sending you my best today and blessings in Christ,
Sally xoxo
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Very much my pleasure, Sally. Blessings to you also. :)))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write Sally, we sometimes need spiritual support in our lives and your words read like a prayer, for us never to be forsaken is a good feeling, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
A faithful write Sally, we sometimes need spiritual support in our lives and your words read like a prayer, for us never to be forsaken is a good feeling, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you, dear Dolly. It is good to hear you enjoyed my expression of my faith in Christ. Sending my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Sally. Your topic is well-expressed in meaningful words. Great job formatting your entry. Each line expresses your faith and/or what having it means to you. Thanks for haring and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
You did a great job with your contest entry, Sally. Your topic is well-expressed in meaningful words. Great job formatting your entry. Each line expresses your faith and/or what having it means to you. Thanks for haring and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Jan, I am overjoyed by this review and kindest comments. I'm seeimg stars! Thank you so much, I am deeply honored. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from poetwatch
I understand and agree with you. He is always there for those that believe. His flame will cleanse the hardest of soils. He is love. He is the way and the light. Those that believe in Him will never die. This is a heavenly entry for the Acrostic Contest. Thank you for sharing your love, Sally. :)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
I understand and agree with you. He is always there for those that believe. His flame will cleanse the hardest of soils. He is love. He is the way and the light. Those that believe in Him will never die. This is a heavenly entry for the Acrostic Contest. Thank you for sharing your love, Sally. :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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I appreciate this kind review dear poet. I means so much to share this faith with you and others here at FanStory. Thank you for sharing your love, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Sally.
-A good topic and
formatting for your acrostic.
-The imagery and
expression of love
for Him is done very well:
"A vessel for His glory--
Kindred spirits, we two."
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
-Very nice image
and presentation, Sally.
-A good topic and
formatting for your acrostic.
-The imagery and
expression of love
for Him is done very well:
"A vessel for His glory--
Kindred spirits, we two."
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you, dear Pam. I always look for your Zinnia and the kind review attached to it. I am a converted Christian, and came to Christ at sixteen. This young girl looks identical to me at the time of my conversion. I had one of my own photos picked out, but it was too aged and yellowed around the edges. This was a good pick, I thought, as I adore *****flowers. *****
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
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You are very welcome, Sally. I am glad you enjoy the zinnia:) I appreciate your reply, and it was a very good image to go with your poem.
Comment from patcelaw
What a wonderful acrostic of faith. It is such a blessing to know that we will never be forsaken by Him. Praise God for His faithfulness toward us as His kids.
Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
What a wonderful acrostic of faith. It is such a blessing to know that we will never be forsaken by Him. Praise God for His faithfulness toward us as His kids.
Patricia
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Yes, it is wonderful to know that even in sickness, blindness, financial troubles, blight, persecution, and problems of every kind, He is there, always. He is the one that is the closest relative, the one we call. He is ever faithful to us, Patricia. I'm so glad we share this deep and rich faith in Christ.
Thank you for stopping to see me today and for the wonderful review and stars. :)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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Just today I had to go get my eyebrows tattooed on as it was getting too difficult for me to draw them in.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Never forsaken, will never forsake, and since the first day of reposing trust in God, still now there is no deviation, His spirit, grace, and help continue; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
Never forsaken, will never forsake, and since the first day of reposing trust in God, still now there is no deviation, His spirit, grace, and help continue; well said, well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind and respectful review of my faith inspired poem. It is always so appreciated.
Sending my best along as well,
Sally :)
Comment from Hitcher
A very strong spiritual outpouring of faith Sally and you have offered it up in the creative form of the acrostic poem. It is a form I enjoy writing myself, it can be tricky to get to flow smoothly but you have nailed it here friend. Very nice, good luck!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
A very strong spiritual outpouring of faith Sally and you have offered it up in the creative form of the acrostic poem. It is a form I enjoy writing myself, it can be tricky to get to flow smoothly but you have nailed it here friend. Very nice, good luck!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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I like your description of my poem, outpouring of my faith. Yes, it certainly is. I hope you received a wonderful baptism, Hitch. I am blessed to have my Jesus who loves me so.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well said. We can never go astray if we walk in His path and follow his teachings. It seems that life on Earth is like school, and a lot of us are flunking out. Maybe reincarnation really means repeating a grade. But can we ever learn to love and not to hate? I have my doubts.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
Well said. We can never go astray if we walk in His path and follow his teachings. It seems that life on Earth is like school, and a lot of us are flunking out. Maybe reincarnation really means repeating a grade. But can we ever learn to love and not to hate? I have my doubts.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Jesus is God's gift of the most deep love there is. The love that makes every effort to close the gap even to the point of giving His body and blood to buy back mankind. The Bible says if we hate one another, we don't know God or His love. I never knew how to love until I met Jesus and became a Christian. This is how I have learned to love and not to hate.
Sending you my best today as always, Phyllis.
Sally xo
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Great! You are obviously on the right track, and for the right reason. :)
Comment from royowen
I was only talking with a friend the other day with a friend about the preciousness of this very subject, that God has a vested interest in us. His love is beyond any measure we can compare it to. This is a wonderful declaration dear Sally, it is more than anything we can imagine. Such a marvellous thing. And so articulate, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
I was only talking with a friend the other day with a friend about the preciousness of this very subject, that God has a vested interest in us. His love is beyond any measure we can compare it to. This is a wonderful declaration dear Sally, it is more than anything we can imagine. Such a marvellous thing. And so articulate, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Roy. I am so glad I share this faith in Christ with you my brother. Sending you my best today and many thanks for the wonderful review
Sal xo
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God job